The Birth of Wheels | Poem

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The desire for movement

In pursuit of storage of energy

Powered by a quest

Brings about an education

But it beginning was a square


It use, was painful

It motion is highest

But in great difficulty

While it drive is fatal

And his strength is in a step


Research says pentagon

That was not even enough

Hum! What about nonagon

It still is not just enough

May be addition of more


Yes, the more the better

But still not the desired answer

Wisdom then speak

Circle of many radii

Oh! Just the needed dexterity


What else could we ask?

If not in the difference

Of the small and the big

Cycling with ease

Motion without a halt


Invention can now take its place

Natal to monocycle with balance

For the trained and competent

Elevated to motorcycle

It become the births of the wheels


© 2013 Abba Elijah also known as elija_god (elijagod)

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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thank Denise Handlon and tsmog for reading and commenting. i appreciate it really!


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Denise Handlon 2 years ago from North Carolina

What a clever poem. I really enjoyed it and hit UP/and across. Will share.


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tsmog 2 years ago from Escondido, CA

Great Poem. Nice! My imagination was enticed and danced along with poetic stanzas.

tim


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Very beautiful poem. Indeed, wheels have turned the whole world into a moving phenomenon. Thank you.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks for the comment acaetnna !


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acaetnna 2 years ago from Guildford

What a brilliant concept ... awesome!


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks Jhamann and Gypsy Rose Lee for your comment !


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Fantastic and fun. Jamie


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Interesting and clever take on wheels


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks !

Mhatter99 and always exploring for your prompt comments on my poems.

Humm!

Yea, i have been writing offine hoping to publish a poetic book as soon as possible.

Notice.... that some of my poems where remove from my hub !


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Haven't seen you for awhile, interesting concept of wheels...


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Thank you for this wonderful reflection.

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