The Blossom

In the depths of my belly I knew you were there
long before lineal colour declared.
That miraculous moment you fused into life
stirred a sentience somewhere deep inside.
Cloistered and curled in the warmth of my womb
I felt you grow and unfurl and then burst into bloom.
In a crimson blur your petals untwined
the pain of the blossom intensly sublime.
Palpable pain paled by your beauty
and the wonder of your being penetrating through me.
Emotions euphoric and profoundly in awe
on that extraordinary day that my daughter was born.

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miss_jkim 4 years ago

This is wonderful! I hope you share this with your daughter one day and she is delighted with the intensity of such beautiful work, and obvious love.

Voted up and beautiful.


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carmaluda 4 years ago from New Zealand Author

Thank you miss_jkim, your enthusiastic and positive response is so appreciated =)


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Such pure love for your unborn babe as well as the beautiful baby that followed.

Thanks so much for sharing this awesome chapter in your life.

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