The Bombshell

She comes in

All jaws drop

She's the bombshell

She will make your heart


She glides in

As cool as she pleases

Batting her eyelashes

Only a glimpse

To anyone who sees

Curvacious splendor

Surrounds her very being

She's a goddess

With no end

No beginning

She will make you stare

Without blinking

The men stand

Ready to please her


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Ericdierker 24 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

I like it -- I could not tell you exactly why. I also could not tell you why one woman is a bombshell apart from the others -- oh well.

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Frank Atanacio 24 months ago from Shelton

sign me up let me glance at the bombshell..:) great poem my friend

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always exploring 24 months ago from Southern Illinois

Ha, I think the two fellas above like your bombshell and so do I...

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BlossomSB 24 months ago from Victoria, Australia

The bombshell has landed - beware! But often the person herself is unaware of the impact she has made, and that's the best way. Made me smile with your poem.

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cleaner3 24 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

great poem Caroline..

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Debra Verville 24 months ago from USA

Great writing and imagination.

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FlourishAnyway 24 months ago from USA

Great poem. Her heart is a weapon.

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Rolly A Chabot 21 months ago from Alberta Canada

Hi Caroline.... Great poem, great we have connected...

Hugs from Canada

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carolinemd21 14 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you all very much for all your kind words and support. :)

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