The Breaking Light

Coming To You

I look and I can find

The light that looks separated and fragmented

Little do I know this light is far from the obvious

Light is all around us day after day

Bringing us new joys and endless sunshine

Maybe it is not for us to know

Where it comes from or how it works it's magic

But to learn to appreciate it's beauty and enjoy all the comforts

That never stop

So whatever may happen today you will always know

Light from a greater power influences us always

In more ways than we can imagine

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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

DREAM ON...well written words to make us stop and think...I never have and never will take anything for granted or accepted without question. It is what I am about.

Life itself is a gift and all the wonderful people who come into it should be relished..however it is up to us to prioritze what is best for us...and toss out the garbage as it is unecessary baggage..bottom line....

" never let anyone blow out your light." have a wonderful day my friend...


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

kj force Once again thank you for your kind words.Life is so amazing.Have a great day.


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MichaelStonehill 4 years ago

A fine poem. Your writing keeps improving.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

MichaelStonehill I am so happy to have my followers stick around through the good and the bad.All I can do is try to release my words into the air and see what images they may bring.Working hard to find the right fit.I want to see the words sing from lip to lip.When all is said and done I want to look back and say this wasn't work at all but so much fun.Thanx for reading and sharing.Have a great day.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Always keep to the light. My light is faith. Nice poem.


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Joy56 4 years ago

nice to meet someone appreciative, every one seems to be complaining these days. There is a higher power looking over us for sure, lighting up our way....... enjoyed this, and yes your work gets better and better. Well done son....... ha ha


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Nice flow of conscious thought. Enjoyable read, Dream on!


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee Light warms my insides and I feel safe.There is always a light to follow.Joy56 We are all beautiful in life and in thought.picklesandrufus To many more lovely days that we can share and enjoy.Thanx everyone and have a wonderful day.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful. We all need reminding, sometimes. Imagine if the sun decided to have a day off?

Great poem. Loved it.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick When we have a couple of days of rain see how our life becomes gloomy.Then when the sunshine comes out again all the bad weather is forgotten.Thanx for sharing.

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