The Canoe Ride ......

She leaned over to her end
of the canoe and
let her fingers dangle into
the rippling wake

And I dreamed .... touch me
that way I beg
I'm not so very hard
to take

I was much jealous of the sun
laying open and
warm her
golden thighs

As her summer dress rose
against them
and took prisoner
of inexperienced eyes

You may not think possible
by I caught her
perfumed scent
from way over here

And before this ride is over
I'll beg your sweetness
again and
again
my dear

And just as quickly she
slipped
into the water and threw me
her dripping
dress

"Oh my God this
water is cold " she says
As I jump in and we
entangle
and then ......you
have to guess














Comments 21 comments

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

thanks for this wet loving experience that took me back to my youthful days of fresh moments of love.

Great write..


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thanks cleaner , Ahh our youth !.....and how is Pueblo today , snowy ?


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

yesterday (sunday ) it snowed about two inces... ha,ha, not much really but it is cold here . today should get up to 36 so it's warming


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

I enjoyed this beautiful poem. I love your captivating style of writing. Hope you will put a collection of them in a little book some day. It will be like hot Cake.

Lovely share.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Ah the old proverbial boat ride, lovely..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Ah, yes the boat ride, the quiet lake and the sun and fun. Thanks for the memories. Loved this sensual poem.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Cleaner , I do miss those "mountains of rocks" ! Gonna go back to the grand canyon[north rim] in the spring ! You're lucky out there . I wish I had moved out there when I was a younger man ! I would still be lost on some ranch out in the hills ! .....Ed Hey have a super winter!


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Lady E , what a nice thing to say . Thank you and you have been one my favs for so long ! I have to ask is that you for real ? Did you get your beauty from mom or dad ? Tell us please ! Sorry , you know "us Guys "!lol.........have a perfect holiday dear E !


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Hi Always , in the real world two people might want to drown each other !..... Her not paddling ...... him slashing her with the paddle , You know don't you ! he he ! Been there done that ?........:-}


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Gypsy come on girl , climb in !........Thank you sweety!


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Ruchira 3 years ago from United States

Enticing indeed :)


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Lady_E 3 years ago from London, UK

@Horseback

Lol. A real one of me is on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/elena.akin

I've been using the HP one for over 2 years and never bothered to change it. Happy holidays too. :-)


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Ruchuria , if you paddle ....I will entice you !.......lol Thank you dear lady !


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Lady E ! Oh my God you are ! Beautiful !........ thank you for revealing yourself ! And to you too my lovely!


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Denise Handlon 3 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful...and romantic. And then, the kiss...and then...


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Denise ,Ummmm ! Such polwerfull yearnings these images !.......:-}


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blondey 3 years ago

very cute and a view into the romantic mind of ahorseback ;)


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Umm Thank you Blondey....lol......i do appreciate that ......:-}


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blondey 3 years ago

sure no problem:)


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Denise Handlon 3 years ago from North Carolina

Yes...how very astute of you. :) lol


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Denise , Not always though ..............lol..:-}

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