The Day I Left You

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The day that I left you it was sunny not a cloud in the sky,

no rain to fall like teardrops , a perfect day to say goodbye.

You had to know it was coming, I told you so many times.

You just didn't listen, you played deaf, dumb and blind.

The day that I left you, you started crying, you kept asking me why.

There was nothing I could tell you all my own tears have run dry.

The day that I left you, I left behind all my fears.

A new life has begun for me, I'm reclaiming all the lost years.

The day that I left you, was the best day of my life,

except for the day I became your wife.

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Pollyannalana 4 years ago from US

I somehow missed you and never returned a visit. So very sorry since you look like a very good writer. This certainly is.

Polly


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christalluna1124 4 years ago from Dallas Texas Author

Thanks so much. The ending is kind of ironic.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

WOW! excellent and touching.

I too liked the ending.

Chris


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brandyBachmann 4 years ago

very meaningful!


ojoazul3 4 years ago

i love you


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

So moving. I hope you're well now Chris.


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dashingscorpio 5 years ago

Beautiful and Poignant!


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itakins 5 years ago from Irl

Very touching poem-I hope you are keeping well.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

a beautiful truth filled poem,


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d-richie93 5 years ago

I always enjoy reading peoms and i think this is a very good one.Please visit one of my hubs and leave a comment


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jm72writes 5 years ago from Missouri

I loved the ending. Good poem.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

I do hope you are going on with your life. I know that leaving someone you love is sad, but sometimes it must be. I've followed you for over a year and am aware of your pain. God Bless you.

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