The Dreams of Pisces

In the beginning there was only
water and within
water all was only dreams
But within the dreams ......is where
life itself began.....
A look .....a warm touch late in
the rivers evening
Two bodies became one and then
stayed that way for all
of life.....One darkened by the
sun
And the other as pale as a moon
reflects through whitewater
rapids
And after the touching
and the joining of
souls ........her hair flowing in
water dreams dissapeared
into the depths
And he followed her
upstream....again






Comments 18 comments

jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Beautiful and intrigueing , You are such a gifted writer , I enjoy reading your work , thank you:)voted up,awesome and beautiful , as always :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you Jami, Rigt back atcha !You know that right!


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

hey ...i sent you a farmer question ... check it out its on the home page :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Farmer ? Wow I wish Jami , are you being cute ?!


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

oh no not at all , im always cute LOL


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

UMM .. nuh uh .. im always cute .Lol


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

You must have a beautiful mind my friend to write such beautiful poetry.

Aewsome and beautiful


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Jami, you are a Texas Devil now aren't you!.....Ha .


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Rosemay , No seriously , your kidding right ? I have a twisted mind ......LOL :-} Thank you for embarrassing me !


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samiaali 5 years ago

Hi ahorseback, This was beautiful! :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Now Jami , there is one of my favorite hubbers ! I hope you are well girl!..Thank you!....:-}


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Are you talking about fish Ahorseback? I loved it!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , it all depends ....are you a pisces LOL? Yes and other people of the water too!....:-}


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is another beautiful poem. Very deep. You're such a romantic writer. Loved it.......


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you Always !....only as a writer I guess LOL...


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Freya Cesare 4 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

My poetic father's mind indeed must be very beautiful and enchanting. The home of compassionate heart.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Oh Freya , and such a beautiful poetic daughter too [I'm proud of myself for that !], I was in a mood , pisces like myself are like that ...........thank you for your kindness to an old man!.....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Marie Grace , Thank you , I was time traveling!lol....Thanks for stopping by ....:-}

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