The Dusty Rose

Inspired by, written about, and dedicated to my mother, Letha May Pitman

April 24,1929 - December 13,1993

We miss you, Mom!

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She could grow roses
like no one else could.
She had a green thumb
that they well understood.

Outside her kitchen,
she planted, with pride,
a lone dusty rose
she could view from inside.

This little bush was the
bloomingest rose...
at least seven at once
would bud, bloom, and pose.

Lavender colored
and scented divine,
those roses kept coming
to bud and then shine.

But one day, came angels
to take her to heaven...
That day, only one bloomed,
in place of its seven.

And then, it quit blooming,
like the dusty rose knew
that the hand of its lover
had bid it adieu.

No more lovely roses
would grow there, in grace,
for the heart of the dusty rose
missed her sweet face.

"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."










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drbj 5 years ago from south Florida

What a lovely tribute to your mother, No_Clue, and so well written. She left you much too soon.


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CMCastro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

How sweet and wonderful to be able to express the beauty of your Mom as in the roses. I wrote a hub before, Called "My Mother Is My Friend." Moms are special!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

drbj, thank you. She did, indeed, but between her birthday and Mother's Day, she is on my heart and mind. This is a true story, btw...no kidding!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Christina. I appreciate your read and comment and shall check out your hub. Take care!


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Ranzi 5 years ago from All Over

Wow, amazing poem about your mother.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Ranzi, thank you, kindly! She is sorely missed by all whose lives she touched!


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

"A mother holds your hand for a while but your heart forever." This is a quote one of my daughter's used on a card she made for my wife on Mother's day. A beautiful tribute.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

A beautiful tribute to a beautiful woman.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Spirit Whisperer, what a lovely quote! and so true! My mom had a tough go of it here in life and our relationship was tumultuous, at best, but I sure miss her! She is on my heart. Thank you!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

WillStarr, thank you! She was a beautiful soul!


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tumblintumblweed 5 years ago

What a beautiful tribute, No_Clue. Very touching,heart-felt

poem....Thanks for sharing..Voted up and beautiful!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Humble bows, weed...atty's as always!


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

Lovely yet sad. Two sentient beings bidding farewell to each other.


No_Clue 5 years ago

Thank you, SilentReed, for your read and comment...It is a sad piece and yet is written with alot of love...that rose bush was an amazing thing, and whenever I was sick, she always came with one of its roses in hand. Perhaps that is why it struck me so strongly when it quit blooming all together after she passed. It was just so odd, like it knew...


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

N.C.

Wonderful piece beautifully dedicated. Your Mom's life was WAY too short. Couldn't help but check out the dates. Reminds me of my Mom gone way too soon (68). Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece!

Sharyn


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Sharyn, thank you for your awesome feedback! Moms are a special gift, for sure. With Mother's Day around the bend, she is on my mind and heart alot, as I am sure is the same for you. Take good care!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

No_Clue, I am all choked up over here :(. I am truly sorry about your moma being gone. I couldn't bare to think of how I would react the day that time comes for my moma. Very beautiful tribute. She left a rose standing inplace to carry on her memory and that is you. Blessings and smiles :)

bella

bella


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

bella girl, I wish I could give you a big hug right now! I will tell you, losing my mom was the biggest hurt I have ever experienced. I especially miss her between her birthday and Mother's Day, and on all holidays! To write about her or do something that I know she loved is comforting, somehow...lots of love and thank you!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

awww this was beautiful, now your mom can plant and grow roses in Heaven's Garden of angels.


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LaurenLL 5 years ago

Thanks for sharing, That rose are nice too.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Nikkij, thank you...Yes I picture her planting and giving out her roses to the angels!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

LaurenLL, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I appreciate it!


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

I followed from your titles alone and then chose this beautiful tribute to the dusty rose and your Mom to read on Mother's Day. I was just about to shut down and head off to the cemetery and plant a few flowers on the grave of my own mother. There are no coincidences. Roses were meant for her today. Thank you my new clueless friend.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

slingobay, I am honored! Blessings to you! Thank you!


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

"twas indeed my honor and my visit to Mom's grave yesterday included planting a bush of pink roses. Thank you.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

slingo, that brought a tear to my eye! What a very sweet son you are!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Beautiful, gentle and loving poem. That is such a heart-warming miracle, I am truly amazed!


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tnderhrt23 4 years ago

BeyondMax, true story. The day she left us, there was but one single rose on that bush, and after that it quit blooming all together! It was bizarre! Thank you!

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