"The Essence of women"

"The Essence of women"

God formed and created women, from the rib of Adam.
God formed and created women, from the rib of Adam.

"The Essence of Women"

The Essence of Women"

God formed and created women, all on his own.

From Adams ribs and precious bones.

Women to man, is a precious and a priceless stone.

In man's eye sight she can never do wrong.

Women is the air that man breathe

And all the unreachable goals he achieves.

Women is the constant beating of man's heart.

A new beginning and a new start.

Women is the essence of man's thoughts, that he holds so dear.

And the closeness of a women' s body heat, that man also hold so near.

Women is the irresistible fantasy that occupies man's mind

She's the essence of love and kindness that's hard to find.

Women is man's life time best friend

To stick by man and work with him to the end.

The essence of women is childish, oftentimes demanding and and incomplete.

But the love,and care of her man makes her complete.

What women want from her man, is ever so simple and plain

She competes for his ardent affections forever and again.

women is the essence of me and of you

a long time wish and beautiful dream come true.

Benny Faye Douglass



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Edwyne Rouchelle 6 years ago

Hi! Loved this piece. You do have the talent for writing poetry. Hope you'll enjoy your Thanksgiving holiday and travels. ttyl


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you love my yokies, for your comment and support. Blessings to you. creativeone59


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love my yorkies 6 years ago from way out west

Great poem. "She's the essence of love and kindness that's hard to find". So true, my dear.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

They are the best gift to man, if they will only appreciate them. Thank you for your comment and feedback. blessing to you my dear. creativeone59


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ivori 6 years ago from Titusville

Wonderful! A woman is a special gift to men.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Larry for such a way with words. thanks for your comment and feedback. I appreciate you. Godspeed. creativeone59


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thanks again esllr, for your very appreciated comment and feedback. blessings to you. creativeone59


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maven101 6 years ago from Northern Arizona

" Women is the air that man breathe "...Indeed..!

Touching poetry beautifully constructed..Thank you, Larry


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esllr 6 years ago

Won-der-ful! I really enjoyed this. God Bless!


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Sarra Garrett, thank you for your comment and your feedback. creativeone59


Sarra Garrett 6 years ago

Very lovely


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you so much ek ellis, I appreciate your comment and feedback. Godspeed. creativeone59


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ek ellis 6 years ago

Where would man be without his woman, love your poem :)


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you poetlorraine, for your comment and feedback. Godspeed. creatived


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you for your comment, feedback and support. Godspeed. creativeone59


poetlorraine 6 years ago

enjoed that


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Hello hello for your comment and feedback. creativeone59


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Veronica Allen 6 years ago from Georgia

This beautiful, you've done it again Creativeone59!


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Hello, hello, 6 years ago from London, UK

A lovely hub, thank you.

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