The Flight of the Horse (a poem of mythical proportions)

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The Flight of the Horse

by John Hansen © 2016


Amidst the clouds it galloped,

It's wings reflect the sun.

Racing through the stratosphere,

Cantering in fun.

φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε

It's hooves created lightning,

And thunder boomed below,

As the horse flew through the stormy sky,

Dashing to and fro.

φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε

Diving, swooping, plunging,

Playing chicken with the birds,

And rising to the Heavens

To inspire poetic words.

φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε

Pegasus (the Horse of Muses) on roof of Poznań Opera House
Pegasus (the Horse of Muses) on roof of Poznań Opera House | Source

Then, Pegasus descended

With a swift and whooshing sound,

Wings folded flat along his back,

Hurtling to the ground.

φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε

Wherever Pegasus struck his hoof

An inspiration fountain burst,

Like Hippocrene the sacred spring

Where muses quenched their thirst.

φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε φ ε

Now back on Mount Olympus

Where he served his master, Zeus,

And to the caretaker of his youth

Urania the Muse.

Pegusus ridden by Bellerophon
Pegusus ridden by Bellerophon | Source

Pegasus the Myth

Pegasus ( Πηγασος) was a flying horse in Greek mythology, (usually depicted as white coloured.) Sired by Poseidon and his mother was the Gorgon Medusa, he was born along with his brother Chrysaor when Medusa was decapitated by Perseus.

Pegasus was tamed by Bellerophon, a Corinthian hero, who rode him into battle against the fire-breathing Chimera. Later, while the hero was attempting to fly to heaven, the gods caused the horse to buck, throwing him back down to earth. Pegasus continued on its way to heaven where he took a place in the service of Zeus.

The horse was also placed amongst the stars as a constellation, whose rising marked the arrival of spring and seasonal rainstorms.

Pegasus stained glass window
Pegasus stained glass window | Source

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Buildreps 6 months ago from Europe

Nice poem and great explanation about Pegasus, John


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always exploring 6 months ago from Southern Illinois

I love this. I'm reminded of going to the races and betting on the horse Poseidon and won a few dollars. Your rhyming is very good. Thank you for sharing.


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FlourishAnyway 6 months ago from USA

This was a nice combination of information and creativity.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for reading and commenting, Buildreps. I appreciate it.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Glad you liked this, Ruby. Good on you winning on a horse named Poseidon. Now you have to watch out for one named Pegasus.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hey, Flourish. Thanks for the kind comment. Have a great day.


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Gener Benter 6 months ago from Mapayapa Village, Pulanlupa, Las Pinas City, Philippines

Nice poem and a magnificent literary style. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

My pleasure, Gener. Thank you for reading and for the generous comment.


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Ericdierker 6 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Really a great read. Your poetry is wonderful.


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Dana Tate 6 months ago from LOS ANGELES

I love the descriptive words you used. Very creative.


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Kaili Bisson 6 months ago from Canada

Loved the poem and the background on the myth. I snapped a photo of a statue of a horned Pegasus in Turkey...I think these were called "alicorn", but not sure if they are related in mythology?


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manatita44 6 months ago from london

Excellent rhyming poem, Jodah. Great!


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mckbirdbks 6 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

A perfect flight of fantasy. Educational, inspirational and imaginative.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Eric, your kind comments on my poetry is always appreciated (so are critical ones for that matter but you never give them :)


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks, Dana, always great to receive your comment on my work. Glad you liked the descriptions.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Kaili. I saw some pics of those horned Pegasus statues "alicorns" but wasn't sure if they were elated either. Thanks for reading this.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Manatita, I appreciate your comment. That means a lot coming from you.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Mike, that's exactly what it was, a bit of a flight of fancy. Glad you consider it educational too. Cheers.


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Larry Rankin 6 months ago from Oklahoma

Nothing quite capture the imagination like a Pegasus. Beautifully and imaginatively written.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Yes, Pegasus has always been a popular figure in mythology. Thank you Larry.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Yes, Pegasus has always been a popular figure in mythology. Thank you Larry.


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Phyllis Doyle 6 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

I like reading the mythical stories of Pegasus and you covered this very well, Jodah. I love your poem. Very interesting and informative article.


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Venkatachari M 6 months ago from Hyderabad, India

Nice poem and very interesting facts of Pegasus. Thanks for sharing them.


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Faith Reaper 6 months ago from southern USA

What a fantastic mythical poem, John! Your words create quite a wonderful visual in one's mind. Plus, your added information is truly interesting and I learned a lot.

Peace and blessings always


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Frank Atanacio 6 months ago from Shelton

Jodah, wow this was so entertaining.. man I loved it


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks, Phyllis. I know you like mythology. Glad you enjoyed this.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Venkat. Glad you found this interesting. Thanks for reading.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

What a great comment, Theresa. I enjoyed writing this and glad you enjoyed the read. Blessings.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for loving this, Frank. Anytime!


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billybuc 6 months ago from Olympia, WA

Spreading your wings and flying, just like Pegasus, you are....well done, John. You are a talented man and a good friend.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Bill, that kind comment is very much appreciated.


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Mel Carriere 6 months ago from San Diego California

Funny how a winged horse could be sired by a man-like God and a chick with a snake infestation problem in her hair. That's mythology for you, or is it? Haven't we all seen horses in our dreams, maybe even flying horses? Could Pegasus have emerged somewhere from our shared consciousness, and on some level is real?

There is a delightful simplicity to your poetry. I wish I had the patience to write verse. Great work!


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Yes, Mel, that is a strange mating and offspring for sure. I think Pegasus has appeared in many people's dreams and fantasies. Saying my poetry has a 'simplicity' about it is a compliment. For me, I want others to easily understand what I write..I don't want to hide it behind ambiguous meanings.


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Mel Carriere 6 months ago from San Diego California

Of course I meant it as a compliment. I truly enjoy your stuff.


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Missy Smith 6 months ago from Florida

I think the simplicity refers to a flow of your words in order for your readers to understand it completely. That is a compliment for sure. I take it as that too when people call my poetry simple. If it's uncomplicated, then it does precisely what I want and expect it to. Your words do exactly what I love a story or poem to do. They grabbed the reader and flew away with them along with Pegasus in your brilliant poem, John.

What can I say, I really, really, liked this one. I love mythology. Mythology, for me, is hard to get a grasp on, but your poem made it beautiful and wonderful. I love the horse Pegasus, and I did not know the story behind Pegasus. I definitely did not know that he was born from Medusa; Medusa is my absolute favorite mythical tale. However, I only knew the story of how she became the gorgon and the beheading by Perseus.

Wow! This really made me want to dig deeper into mythology. I have always been interested since I watched the "Clash of the Titans" the one that starred Harry Hamlin as Perseus. It's one of my all-time favorite movies.

Altogether Excellent Hub! :)


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks as always Missy. I certainly took Mel's comment as a compliment, I would be offended if anyone said my poetry was "complicated." I wasn't aware of Pegasus's origins either..until I researched this. Glad this gave you a new desire to investigate mythology deeper. I also agree about the original "Clash of the Titans" with Harry Hamlin. It was one of my favourites too.


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DDE 6 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

You have a great mind in writing. Your mind works wonders with such imaginations.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hello, Devika. Thanks for your comment. I think a writer's best friend is his/her imagination.


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teaches12345 6 months ago

Pegasus has always drawn my interest. You have brought out interesting angles for readers to ponder.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Dianna, yes Pegasus has always intrigued me too, and I learnt some new things as I was writing this.


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aviannovice 6 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Pegasus happens to be a hero of mine. Loved it.


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Jodah 6 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

That's great, Deb. If you get any photos of him let me know. :)


Siddharth Kapoor 5 months ago

Interesting, John. Rhyming like a racing whistle here. I see that!!


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Jodah 5 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you, Siddharth. Much appreciated.


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lawrence01 5 months ago from Hamilton, New Zealand

John

Pegasus is one of my favorite creatures from mythology. He's also them emblem the Airborne Brigade used to wear when I was in the Army.

Loved this poem and learning the story behind him

Lawrence


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Jodah 5 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

That's great that Pegasus was your emblem in the Army Airborne Brigade, Lawrence. Glad you enjoyed this hub.


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bravewarrior 5 months ago from Central Florida

I've always like the image of Pegasus, but never knew the story. Thank you for that, John. Now I know why I have two tattoos on my body featuring Pegasus.


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Jodah 5 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Glad to bring you some awareness of the story behind the subject of your tattoos, Shauna. Thanks for reading.


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annart 5 months ago from SW England

Love the poem and thanks for the information to go with it. Great job, John!

Ann


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Jodah 5 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you, Ann. Cheers.

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