The Fog- A Poem From The Frog

Behind The Scenes

Before I allow you to read this, I must explain.

Many of you do not know me to write poetry; but the moon is in the perfect position tonight and the time is right for me to attempt some poetry.

I let my mind drift and my fingers type and this is what came to be from it.

I ask you of the poetry field to honestly grade this work and let me know how it sits.

I hope that the meaning you attain from the words in this poem will have meaning in your life. I have always considered poetry much like a painting; showing deep truths about the artists life.

Please read the poem and give your opinion. Thank you.

The Fog

Grabbing my sleeve
as I stroll
down the walkway
of life.

Darning the needles
that knit
my soul
into disparity.

It growls;
then purrs
an unrecognizable
tone.

It begs my indifference
to the helpless
humanity
that is unaware.

Slowly
the Son rises
and the haze
disappears
on the horizon.

All Contents Are © G.L. Boudonck

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G-Ma Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

I thought it was deep, gentle and very revealing...you have come such a long way my friend...God Bless...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA

Nice but it doesn't seem to rhyme


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The Loan Arranger 5 years ago

An interesting insight into inner self.


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Well done! I thought it was very moving.


ralwus 5 years ago

I am no critic. I get what I get out of it and 'twas good to me.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

I enjoyed reading and it was good. As ralwus said I am not a critic either and I think if you are getting what you want then you're on to a winner.

Hope this means we are going to read some more.

Take care.


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dallas93444 5 years ago from Bakersfield, CA

Many layers. Thought provoking. thanks for sharing...


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Froggy213 5 years ago from On A Mountain In Puerto Rico Author

Thank you my friends--I found as I read it again, many meanings are coming through the words behind the words.

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