Forbidden Secret

FORBIDDEN TO REMEMBER, TERRIFIED TO FORGET.

I'm going to smile like nothing's wrong. Talk like everything's perfect. Act like it's all a dream... And pretend it's not hurting me.

See the tears on my eyes?
See the fake smiles on my face?
It tells of an old story
A 'once-upon-a-time' case.


It's a secret I cannot tell
Sacred and forbidden
Only our hearts knew
What is really going.


For it dealt with heartaches
A very sad and unending bittersweet reality
For destiny is against us
And won't even give us a chance.


We had to part ways
Though it's breaking my heart
What happened to us all those times
Remains a secret no one knew from the start.


Forever this secret be unknown
And forever be sealed
No one will ever know
Till the time for us ends.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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epigramman 4 years ago

..you are a very very special writer - you create poetic magic which leaves even the epi-man speechless and breathless - thank you for inspiring me as well as it is I who looks up to you - lake erie time 11:40pm and thank you also for your support of my humble little hub space


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Awesome!! the secret too forbidden to tell. i wish you all the best, love your hubs!


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

snowdrops..I know your secret..it was once mine..and we never speak of it..shhhhh ! well written.


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

hahaha! yeah..i know i know.. (zipped lips) :)


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

unknownspy...you are so creative with your writes..I especially enjoyed this one...I think anyone whose has loved on the edge, can relate....


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Epi, thank you so much for this wonderful message! I'm speechless :)

KJ Force..maybe it's what you think..shhh... thanks :)

Snowie, as always..thank you for the support!


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi M. this is such a heartfelt poem that hints of some unknown secret held deep within your heart,and kept there forevermore .

Vote up and more !!!


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

You are great never breaking the pact, never revealing a secret. Voted up. Beautiful!!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

K and Vellur, thank you thank you so much! I really appreciate the read guys!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

A very intriguing read, beautifully done.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Jo!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow this is simply beautiful.. I do love your poetry....just breathless... voted up and sharing

Debbie


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Debbie..thank you so much for your kind words!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

You are a beautiful writer...and as such a beautiful person. Well done...so well done!


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msorensson 4 years ago

I love the poem..


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Unknown, you're on a roll! Keeping secrets can eat away at you, make you wary, weary and can even make you sick. Putting your feelings on paper, or in today's world, in cyberspace, can help relieve some of the anxiety. Hopefully, you now know you are the master of your own destiny. Only you can make the decisions and changes to point you in the direction of happiness and satisfaction with yourself.

Love yourself first and you will reap what you sow!

Beautiful poem, my friend!


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

Inspiring poem, the emotions that were drawn are really something else, this may be one of my favorite pieces from you. Thanks for sharing this.


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endless sea 4 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

very great!!! "A once upon a time case" a forbidden secret its all so awesome voted up all the way...beauty


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Anjili 4 years ago from planet earth, a humanoid

A hush affair it was and quiet it would remain, for ever and ever, long after you parted. Well done


Azlan 4 years ago

great hub


Azlan 4 years ago

great hub


azlan 4 years ago

I can sence your secrete,am quite pshchic sometimes.thankyou for this wonderful msg.tc.all the best:)GOD BLESS.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. It's no secret here who the creative poet is.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

"It's a secret I cannot tell, sacred and forbidden, only our hearts new." This "secret" described in such a deep, mysterious and meaningful way.

voting up


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Hi M, loved this! and yes I totally understand too! lol!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Voted up and beauitful. Your secret poem is enchanting.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

How poignant, us. We've probably all had relationships like that - could never figure out why they ended - just did. Voted up and beautiful.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

no one can know your soul. the price of being special. thank you


bluesea 4 years ago

unknownspy i love your poems


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Billy, Msorensson, Bravewarrior, Job, Endlesssea, Anjili, Azlan, Gypsy, shining irisheyes, Nell, Joyce, Ann and Mhatter...

I am so pleased on your kind and wonderful messages.. and for keeping my secret too ..shh..

I'm always thrilled to see and read your comments! Thank you all!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you bluesea for stopping by.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Unknown Spy

Secrets taken to the grave.

It is no secret that you are a talented writer.

Voted up and beautiful


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow, thank you soo much Sue for the appreciation! Im so glad you like the poem.


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Esther Earl 4 years ago

So wonderful poem. I love reading it from the start to end. Wish you the best and may God bless you with what you deserved in life - happiness. I may say that a man would be lucky to win your heart unknown. Love it.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much for the wonderful message!


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Lot Rillera 4 years ago from Philippines

beautiful poem. I can feel that there is heartaches in that secret, but if hiding it to ease the pain much better. voted up spy.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Lot, thank you so much..shhhh.. :)


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allan harold rex 4 years ago from gods own country,india

loved the opening stanza, a perfect beginning for a very special write,the beauty of it lies in the simplicity itself


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Allan for the nice words :)


wwolfs 4 years ago

Beautiful poem. I can certainly feel you have been heartbroken somewhere in your life. Not everyone is capable of revealing a deep secret and will live with it for different reasons.

Writing is a great place for release, and works for many. Keep writing as you write well. You will find others that will relate to your feelings. I wish you the best to find the peace you need and to mend your heart.

Voted up and beautiful!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Wwolfs, yeah..i have been. through writing we can express our feelings even we dont have to reveal something we dont want the world to know. we can hide it on words..

God bless always :)


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Very special and beautiful writing, thank you and voted up.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Movie master!


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Fennelseed 4 years ago from Australia

This is just lovely and the beauty lies not only in the words revealed, but in what is not revealed. It leaves the writer knowing and the reader forever pondering. A poem of intrigue. My votes and best wishes to you US, and sharing.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Secret pain that noone can know about. So beautiful. Great job. Many votes!


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carter06 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

Wow! I loved this it's so beautiful...'a secret that remains a secret'...fennelseed is so right...the power is in what is not revealed...thanks for sharing...up & awesome...cheers


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Annie, Victoria and Carter.. thank you all for your wonderful comments.. yeah, the secret kept forever..


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

You've done it again, another beautifully expressed poem. Very mysterious and engaging work M. Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

james, thank you so much for the support!


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Up, awesome, and beautiful unknown spy. Many can relate, me as well. Can't help but wonder if this is true to your heart. If so, I know how you feel. Never easy. Either way, this is a great poem.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yeah sad to say it is..it happened a long time ago.but the scent of this secret will forever be sealed.. :)

thanky ou for the votes and up!


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rajan jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Very beautiful, very touching poem. You bring out the inner pain so well with your words, unknown spy.

Voted up, awesome and beautiful.

Shared it my friend.


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

I love the flow! So secretive, eh? It is better that way for only you and that someone have the right to keep it a secret.


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Yeah, this is very mysterious..


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Rajan, thank you so much.

@Coffeegginmyrice. Yeah! so secretive poem.. Anyway there's nothing we cn do but to say goodbye.

thanks also Snowie.


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IsadorasThought 4 years ago

It's like I am getting shivers through my bones. Well done.


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Voronwe 4 years ago

I apologize for it seems that you didn't like my previous comment. Was merely hinting that you could quote the header and that it was a 'memorable' line many would recognize. Ofcourse it's your hub to control your comments...I just wanted to be clear on what I implied.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you IT. Take care!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Voronwe, maybe your message is not intended for me? Just that I never received your first comment though..and you said here, " you didn't like my previous comment".

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