The Ghost's of Patriots........

Thank you , men and women.....

Just an iron clad ghost rattles away on
horseback ......his shoulders creaking
His chain mail rusting
He knows only one cause
To ride
for the king

His armor dented .... tarnished
and missing the shine
that once awed the kingdoms
of fools
And kings that
take all

He knows but one thing and one
thing alone
And that too
close to
being stolen

Though ride again he will
for the queen
for the gold
for the promise
or for no reason
at all

But the betrayal of
this patriot the worse
betrayal of all
And now what
as he lays his armor down
and cries as
the grand babies are
laid in his

Will you too forget
or her ? Just like the
the queen
the ghosts
and the grandbabies

We tip our hats to the patriots , we hubbers , and we know a few don't we! Among us are those who serve or served and for that ............We are forever greatful!
Thank You !............

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

Long live the patriots ahorseback and Kudos to this wonderful tribute to them...

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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

Amen. Thank you.

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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Raciniwa, thank you , I love to blow the trumpet for the patriots. Although I don't know the} Thank you for caring.

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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

WD.Curry, They [you]deserve so much praise! Thank you for sharing this.....and thank you! for your service to our country:-}

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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

What a wonderful poem for the Patriots. We should all do well to remember the patriots of our own countries no matter where we are from.

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Storytellersrus 4 years ago from Stepping past clutter

I read this poem as a poem about the revolutionaries and it made me sad to think what they would think of us. Was it worth their blood to form a nation that worships the dollar above all things? Sorry, I am feeling pretty sad about the state of the Nation theae days! As a serf, I watch my power diminish- wait, maybe that is simply old age setting in, lol!

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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

It's nice to see a tribute to those who sacrifice so much. Hubtastic!

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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi ahorseback, a wonderful tribute to the patriots.

A big vote up, best wishes MM

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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi Cardisa , I am always amazed by the often silent service of those who give thier time to others, There are so many of them too!....Be well my beautiful friend!

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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Storryteller , No my dear not you , you remain ageless to us ! I agree with what you say though. Maybe we should feel shame!.....Be well smiley!....:-}

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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Thank you poetvix , and for you to, I know you love them as well, Even in all our diversity in politics and ideals in America or anywhere.Most people appreciates a patriot!..Thanks for stopping....:-}

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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Movie Master , Hello my friend .Good to see you, Got to catch up with you!.....:-}

femmeflashpoint 4 years ago


My thanks to them always, and God help me to never forget the necessity of it.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

FemmeFlash , Yes, you got that right !I know we must not forget !Thank you for sharing...:-}

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