The Gifts of Faith - Questions (Ch. 14)

Nathaniel took the back roads home
Nathaniel took the back roads home | Source

Nathaniel walked the girls back to Bouquets & Rainbows lost in thought. A quiet walk was in order as Faith and Sarah seemed to be drifting in their own thoughts as well.

They spent a few moments exchanging obligatory pleasantries then Nathaniel hopped in his car and headed out.

He took the back roads home, allowing the meanderings of his mind to be guided by the countryside.

I don’t know anything about my mother. Why didn’t Dad ever talk about her? And how – or why – is it I’m first learning about her from Hal Montgomery’s daughter? And why don’t I remember Faith? What force has brought us together? I was just out for a lazy drive the day I walked into her shop. What does it all mean?

Nathaniel’s questions were rapidly firing in his mind. He didn’t have answers to any of them. In an attempt to quiet his mind he turned on the radio.

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Nathaniel sang to the radio

“Well, that was some lunch, huh? And I’m not talking about the food.” Sarah applied a fresh coat of lipstick while she waited for Faith to respond.

“That it was, my friend. I wonder what’s going through Nathaniel’s mind right about now.”

“I think it’s more like what isn’t going through his mind. You laid quite a bit on him, Faith. I found it odd that he didn’t know his mother’s maiden name. Didn’t you tell me Nathaniel’s mom died in childbirth?”

“She did. That’s what Daddy told me. Why wouldn’t Nathaniel’s dad have told him about her? Surely he had questions when he was little.” Faith finished with the flowers she was arranging for a customer who was due any minute to pick them up.

“You know what’s strange, Sarah? When I handed Julie’s ring over to Nathaniel, the ugliness I saw swirling in his soul began to fade. By the time we left the diner it was gone. And your rainbow was aglow. It was so peaceful and I was no longer afraid. In fact, I’m convinced I was meant to meet Nathaniel. I was meant to find the ring. Hell, I think I was meant to buy Julie’s childhood home for the sole purpose of finding that ring and unlocking… something. I’m not sure what, but we’ll find out. Of that I have no doubt.”

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The barn preceded the house
The barn preceded the house | Source
Modest house. Good place to have a cold beer.
Modest house. Good place to have a cold beer. | Source

It was a good day for a leisurely drive to clear his head. The sky was pale blue with billowy white clouds, the fresh air was fragrant with wild flowers, and the breeze was soothing. Nathaniel found himself singing to the radio as he turned the MG into a long dirt driveway. Why, he had no idea, but the path seemed familiar and beckoned to him.

A little farther down the driveway a large barn and modest farmhouse came into view. He recognized it immediately. As he pulled up to the barn, a tall good looking man came out to see who had pulled up into his drive, wiping his hands on a towel that hung from the carpenter’s loop of his overalls.

Shielding his eyes from the sun, the man walked up to Nathaniel’s car and stopped. A smile spread on his face as he greeted the man he hadn’t seen since he was just a boy.

“Well, all dee swuz. Is that you, Nathaniel?”

Nathaniel closed the car door and extended his hand in greeting. “It is, Mr. Montgomery. How are you, sir?”

“Oh, please call me Hal. You ole enough now, son!” Hal shook Nathaniel’s hand then wrapped him in a ‘big ole’ bear hug. “How’s ya Paw? I ain’t seen him in quite a while. He doin’ good?”

“He’s just fine Mr. – uh, Hal. He’s thinking of retiring early and maybe doing some travelling.” Nathaniel broke himself from the bear hug but couldn’t wipe the smile off his face. He felt like he’d come home.

“Well, shoot boy. Mo’ powuh to ‘im. I’m due fo’ a break. Come on inside. We’ll have a beeuh an’ catch up.” With that, the two headed for the house.

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The rest of the afternoon went by quickly. Bouquets & Rainbows saw more walk-in traffic than it had in months. The girls were busy with customers and phone-in orders. It crossed Faith’s mind that they’d better get busy in the gardens if they expected to keep up with the sudden burst in business.

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The scent of Lily of the Valley filled the room
The scent of Lily of the Valley filled the room | Source
Nathaniel found himself once again standing by this bed
Nathaniel found himself once again standing by this bed | Source
A sampling of Hal's craftsmanship
A sampling of Hal's craftsmanship | Source

As soon as they entered the kitchen, Nathaniel was overwhelmed with the scent of Lily of the Valley. Along with it came a long-forgotten memory that made him dizzy. He pulled out one of the kitchen chairs and sat down; afraid he’d fall down if he remained standing.

Nathaniel was in a state of déjà vu. He saw a little boy standing by the bedside of a dying woman. A rainbow hovered above the headboard and spoke: “Nathaniel, I’ll be right back. I have someone I need to see. Mama needs you. With my help, we can pull the cancer from her and Faith won’t loose her Mama. I’ll be right back. Promise.”

He saw the little boy stroke the woman’s face, hair, and arms. He wanted to bring relief to her. He didn’t want her to die. Before he knew it, he was engulfed in a swirling, smelly substance. He couldn’t breathe. Where was the rainbow woman? Where was Hope? He couldn’t stop it. The disease kept coming and coming. The room filled with mist and the scent of Lily of the Valley. He saw a little girl at the doorway, frozen by what she was seeing. She screamed for him to stop hurting her mama. Didn’t she know he was trying to save her mother’s life? Then the rainbow came back, but it was too late. The woman had taken her last breath.

“Nathaniel? Nathaniel! Ah you akay? You look pretty peekid, son. D’ya need somethin’ t’eat?”

Nathaniel was back in the kitchen with Hal Montgomery 20 years after what he’d just relived. He took a moment to regain his whereabouts before answering. “No, Hal. I’m fine. Just a bit too much sun I guess. In fact, I just had lunch with Faith and Sarah.”

“Well, I’ll be durned! How are my girls? Did they talk y’ear off?” Hal grinned as he handed a beer to his guest.

Nathaniel took a much-needed swig of his beer before responding. “Conversation certainly flowed and made for a very interesting lunch, for sure, Hal.” Oh, if you only knew! And what just happened? Was that me in that room so long ago? Why don’t I remember any of it?

Thankfully, the next hour of conversation got Nathaniel’s mind off the questions in his head that only led to more questions. After a couple of beers, Hal took him to the barn to show him what he’d been working on. He still had a few customers, but mostly Hal’s time was spent creating hand-crafted furniture to leave to his daughter when the day came. He was quite talented. Without his woodworking, he’d not know what to do with himself now that he lived alone.

Nathaniel spotted a large structure in the barn that was covered with a tarp. When he walked closer Hal stopped him. It wasn't a piece for sale nor was Hal able to look at it, let alone show it to anyone else. It was a four-poster bed he’d made years ago to replace the one his beloved wife died in. But he just couldn't bring himself to do it. To this day he slept in the bed they shared, the bed in which she died. He wouldn't let go of her. He just couldn't. That and his memories were all he had left of Naomi.

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Nathaniel opened the front door to his father's home and bellowed, "Why have you never talked about my mother?"
Nathaniel opened the front door to his father's home and bellowed, "Why have you never talked about my mother?" | Source

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The ride home on the back roads was a God-send for Nathaniel. Today had been one hell of a day. He had so many questions. And what was up with the vision he had when he entered Hal Montgomery’s home? The ring. There was definitely significance to the ring. Faith. Her Mom. And who was Hope? Too many questions and a whole lot of weirdness. Coincidence? Nathaniel didn’t believe in coincidence. He believed in reason and cause. It was time to find the answers. He was not only confused but a little angry at the same time.

Before he went home he had one more stop to make.

Good. He’s home.

Nathaniel opened the front door to his father’s home and bellowed, “Dad? Dad! Why have you never talked about my mother?”



Shauna L Bowling

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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Sha...well I gave my opinion, but I'm a believer in "the more we know about someone, their background, family, etc...the more we might understand them on a personal level."....It will be interesting to see what sort of opinions you receive on your question.

All I want to add is that your story is wonderful and with each chapter it pulls your reader in closer and eager to know what's in store.

I think you've got the GIFT, girl!...Up++++


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Paula, it means so much to me that you responded before you received the email I just sent. Since you're the first one here I took a peek at your vote. That's what I would have voted if I weren't on the inside looking out. Thank you for that!

Comments like yours keep me going. Finishing this novel is my dream. Thanx for being active in my testing ground and being a supportive friend.


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RachaelOhalloran 2 years ago from United States

Each chapter draws me in more and more. I can't wait to see what happens when Nathaniel confronts his father with his questions. Looking forward to more of this story!

Voted up!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Rachael, thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read and comment. I know what you have on your plate, so that means a lot to me!


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

Wonderful read, Sha. I will be disappointed if you do not give Nathaniel's father a chance to tell his side of the story. I'll bet he can

clear up some of the confusion that Nath. is feeling, as well as give us some answers we have been longing to hear.

Great job, Sha!

DJ.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Another interesting part of your suspenseful story. I wonder why Nathaniel's father has never told him about his mother. Much to think about. With each episode a new mystery is added which keeps me wanting more. I love your story!


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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

Yes to your poll..I think it's essential. As for the story, I can say that it flows very well. The dialogue is not too much nor too little, but seems to fit well with the flow. I think you've done a yeoman's job so far...I've always wanted to use the word "yeoman" in a sentence. :)


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Bettyoverstreet10 2 years ago from Vacaville, Ca.

I am now captured by interest and respect for your writing skills! This is the first I have read, now I have to go back and catch up!


Ghost32 2 years ago

Now, THERE'S the punch line I've been looking for:

[(bellowing) "Dad? Dad! Why have you never talked about my mother?"]

Sounds like a great way to trigger a real man to man, heart to heart session, right there! Love it.


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Happyboomernurse 2 years ago from South Carolina

Hi Sha,

Lots of interesting questions posed by this episode and yes, I think a scene between Nathanial and his Dad could move the story along in a dramatic way. Feels that's a natural next point.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hugs,

Gail


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marcoujor 2 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Dear Sha,

I absolutely agree with Paula, dear Sha. And this chapter is a perfect lead in to these answers...

Your dialogue is natural and authentic, making the reader feel as though they are a part of the story.

At least for HP, I am loving the musical insertions as well... so interactive.

I enjoy getting into the heads of the different characters-- voted UP and UABI ...Love ya, Maria


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Shauna, I am anxious to hear what Nathaniel's father has to say. I think he could add an interesting slant to the story. Another great chapter with engaging characters, and I agree the music videos are excellent. Voted up.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

DJ, I think hearing what Nathaniel's father has to say is important to the story. Up til now it's been all about the girls. It's time for the men to speak and that they will!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Ruby, I'm glad you're liking this tale. We will soon learn more about Nathaniel, his father, and why he never spoke of his mother. Thanx for sticking with this story!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Bill, I'm glad I provided you with the opportunity to use yeoman in a sentence. Ha ha. That is my writing coaches last name. (I've since quit the coaching to save on expenses). Thanx for your input. You know how much I value your critiques.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Betty, it's nice to see a new face. Welcome! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Let me know what you think.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

I really appreciate your comment, Ghost. I know you don't really care for chick-flick type stories. It was time to add a little testosterone to the plot. I'm glad you approve, my friend!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Gail, the confrontation between Nathaniel and his dad didn't come to me until I saw it on paper. Like magic - there it was! I think it'll provide an interesting sub-plot for sure. Enjoy your day!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Mar, if you're getting into the heads of the characters, that tells me I'm on the right track. I love adding music to these chapters. Of course they'll come out when the book is complete, along with all the photos. Hopefully, when it's time for final edit I will have painted sufficient pictures with words.

Thanx for the great comment!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Thank you John. I felt it was time for a different perspective in the story. Some twists and kinks may give it deeper meaning and tie up some loose ends.


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btrbell 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

The sorry is truly getting more intriguing and the characters more endearing! You've got this Shauna! Up++ and, of course, I voted to put Nathaniels dad in the picture!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

You got it, Randi. Nathaniel's dad is definitely in. I already have the next chapter in mind. I had some thoughts last night when I went to bed, so I got up and jotted them down.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

You got it, Randi. Nathaniel's dad is definitely in. I already have the next chapter in mind. I had some thoughts last night when I went to bed, so I got up and jotted them down.


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Nellieanna 2 years ago from TEXAS

Fascinating build-up of tension in the tale in this chapter! I confess I need to go back and refresh and/or catch up on it all. Have been so distracted of late that I've lost the thread, nearly. But this stirs me to enjoy going back. It's sort of the way I love to read, anyway - - backtracking and lingering over all the intrigue and juicy parts. Great writing, Shauna!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Nellieanna, it pleases me to have you here. I know what you've been going through of late. You are so unselfish, I almost feel guilty in reading your comment. You are one wonderful woman. You are a role model to us all. You are simply amazing!


Chris Rose 2 years ago

My-oh-my, it's getting exciting! You've puled us in sugar, you've pulled us in!

Well-written, my friend, keep up the good work. And I just LOVE Hal's accent, well done, i can hear him! :-)


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Chris, I'm thrilled to see you here! Hal definitely is an old Georgia boy through to the core. Glad you can hear him. I'm sure he appreciates that as much as I do.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Chris, I'm thrilled to see you here! Hal definitely is an old Georgia boy through to the core. Glad you can hear him. I'm sure he appreciates that as much as I do.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Dear Sha,

You are adding great depth to your writing, and I think it would add much more to include more on the character of Nathaniel's dad.

Great music choices too.

Keep these coming!


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

Your writing, particularly the dialog has grown, and you should introduce the father to let him explain himself. I look forward to your next installment in this series.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Will do, Faith. I've already begun working on Chapter 15. Nathaniel's dad is definitely becoming a part of the story.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Thank you, Flourish. It's nice to hear my writing has grown. That's a wonderful compliment and inspiration to keep moving forward.


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CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

"It will be interesting to see how their relationship bears on the story, so yes - give it a shot." -- that's my 2 cents.

I like the writer's (and that's YOU) imagination and descriptive use of elements to make the story more exciting and appealing for readers.

Brave it out Sha! Way to go!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Thank you, Cris. What an amazing comment! Enjoy your day.


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Nellieanna 2 years ago from TEXAS

You’re so kind and sweet, Shauna. No need to feel at all guilty! You’ve your own full life and sets of multiple challenges. I guess it’s what keeps us vital and aware. Much preferable to the alternatives of sitting around bored, helpless and hopeless, waiting for the end to arrive. It will have to catch me 'on the run'! ;-)

When it comes to comments and replying to them, they're one of the most personal and direct connections between us HP buddies and colleagues, so I value them!

Believe me, it’s my pleasure to try to keep up with as much of everything going on as much as possible. I’d prefer to be able to do more, but in addition to my regular online life, there happen to be a number of other non-related to anything online urgent issues to which I’ve been having to also attend. It’s all ‘life’ and a vigorous exercise in grit and purpose.

But I just won’t let my esteemed and beloved friends not be kept up with as much as I possibly can. I wish I could do more and touch bases with more folks, but- as my Dad always reminded me - I have to know my limitations, though I tend to resist them! haha. But when I have to set a few priorities, that, too, is part of grit and purpose. My mother and dad’s examples of those traits are quite impelling, too! :-)


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Nellieanna, I know you've had a lot on your plate lately. It means a lot to me that you found the time to read the latest chapter of The Gifts of Faith.

God bless you and hang in there!


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Nellieanna 2 years ago from TEXAS

Thanks - I'm trying to.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

You know where to find me if you feel the need to vent, my friend.


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Shyron E Shenko 2 years ago

Shauna, I am enjoying this very much. I did not vote in your poll, but would like to read a few more chapters before deciding if I would like to know why his father did not tell him about his mother and how she died.

Voted up, ABI and shared.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Smart move, Shyron. I'll let you get caught up rather than give you any hints.


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aviannovice 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ohhhhh, this is going to be powerful. I like it already.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Awesome! Thanx, Deb. I'll try to finish chapter 15 soon and post it as well.


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Anna Haven 2 years ago from Scotland

Looks like I have a few chapters to catch up on. Apologises for the delay, I was busy with the referendum, and between work and kids I am finding myself time poor.

I am really liking the fact that Nathaniel is going to speak to his father. It opens up a whole new facet of the mystery, and as you gradually open up Nathaniel to us, and we delve deeper into his psyche, it is spawning a myriad of questions. He is a really interesting character and you have cleverly maintained that element of mystery right through all these chapters.

I am going to see what happens next...


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Anna, a writer couldn't ask for a better comment!

Please don't ever apologize for having a life, my friend. Your kids come first. Always.

I'm pleased that you agree with how/when I've brought Nathaniel into the mix. I'll stop there because I don't want to give anything away.


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tillsontitan 2 years ago from New York

Oh I'm so glad I came back to read this wonderful story. You weave so much into your stories from dialogue to intrigue. I wasn't going to read a lot today but you've captured me again. I love your characters and there intertwining. Can't wait to read more.

Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida Author

Mary, I hope you can go back to the beginning. It'll make more sense if you do. Faith and Hope have come a long way since the beginning.

Thanx for the votes. Too cool!

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