The Gypsy Rides a Big Dark Mare

The gypsy rides the big dark mare while
everybody stands perfectly still
And when she cantors by and smiles
at me I lose all my self will
My dream is to jump up behind and
ride along with her as one
Yet I'm so shy that i just can't I'm
frozen in place and lacking any fun
And the reason you ask ......well hey
everybody knows
That gypsy maiden on the big dark mare
she's not wearing any clothes
But today its different ....I'm ready
to take the maiden with all precautions
As I stand waiting in the shadows
and consider all my options
Along she comes in the distance
the mare worked into a lather
Oh no ! It'll not happen this day
because following is her Father

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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

ha,ha, cool poem Ed.


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

LOL....This is cute! For a minute there, I thought it was a sort of dedication to Lady Godiva!!.....Watch out for Dad!..UP+++


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

I love this. Great imagery and daddy too. lol Loved this. Was she Lady Godivas sister?


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Cleaner man . Lets ride !


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LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Haha.... LOL! Great poem, Ed. Couldn't stop picturing you face when you saw Dad, LOL..... voting up and awesome!


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Ahh ha ! You know about riding naked !........:-}


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

LOL...adorable...

(um..it' s not healthy to ride naked...don't ask me how i know this...LOL)

love ya cowboy!

up and sharing..


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Thanks Gypsy , good morning and no ......I kinda thought it was you !........:-}


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Lathing , well yeeaa ! .........Ha thank you dear!


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

How in the world would I know ! ...........How inthe world do U know ! I'll tell ya one thing if anyones done it .....Laslie has ,right !?1


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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Well done cowboy. Big smile at the end.

Graham.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

old albion Tnank you sir , ..........:-}

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