The Last Supper of Judas (a poem)

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The Last Supper of Judas.

by John Hansen © 2014

"Judas, you may choose your meal,

Anything you like.

Write your order on the form,

Be it seafood, chicken, steak."


I took the piece of paper

But expressed no word of thanks.

I'd think about it later,

My mind was shooting blanks.


I'd rather contemplate my life

Both happy times and sad,

Like backpacking in Europe,

Or being mugged in Chad.


Then following my gap-year,

With proud college graduation.

To land a job in brokerage firm

Gave feelings of elation.


The girl I fell in love with,

We set a wedding date.

One crazy drunken moment,

And now it's all too late.


The jury's verdict, "GUILTY!"

I had to catch my breath.

"Judas Steven Garrett,

I sentence you to death!"


The chaplain enters with The Book,

To ask me to repent,

And seek the Lord's forgiveness

For a life that was ill-spent.

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I pick up the pen and paper

And write upon the form,

"Eye fillet steak with mushroom sauce,

And lobster tail, and corn."


This will be my final meal,

My last Earthly request,

So I'll share my meal with Jesus,

The Lord will be my guest.

The Last Last Meal In Texas

In the United States, most states give the "special meal" a day or two before execution to Death Row prisoners. Alcohol or tobacco are usually denied. Unorthodox or unavailable requests are usually replaced with substitutes

However, in September 2011, the state of Texas abolished all special last-meal requests after condemned prisoner Lawrence Russell Brewer requested a huge last meal and did not eat any of it, saying he was not hungry. His last meal request was for a plate of two chicken-fried steaks with gravy and sliced onions, a triple-patty bacon cheeseburger, a cheese omelet with ground beef, tomatoes, onions, bell peppers, jalapeños, a bowl of fried okra with ketchup, a pound of barbecued meat with half of a loaf of white bread, a portion of three fajitas, a meat lover's pizza (topped with pepperoni, ham, beef, bacon, and sausage), a pint of Blue Bell, a serving of ice cream, a slab of peanut-butter fudge with crushed peanuts, and a serving equivalent to three root beers (non-alcoholic). The abolition followed a complaint by a Texas Senator, John Whitmire of Houston, who called the meal "inappropriate".

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Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

These are getting so good John! You may want to get a copyright on them all before putting them out for all the Judas's in the world, lol. I just don't have words to express how very much you impress me with the growth of your writings. I saw potential months ago and now you have gone beyond proving me right!


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

Good one, John. I like how you combine the idea of prison meals and Judas.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Jackie, I guess practice makes perfect. I'll have to publish one day. I had been sorting out all my poetry into word documents and then my computer crashed and lost it all. I've had to start over, so I'll get there. Thanks for your comment and encouragement.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading Flourish, and you kind comment. The Last Supper idea came first, then I made t about a guy named Judas.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading Flourish, and you kind comment. The Last Supper idea came first, then I made t about a guy named Judas.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Wonderful! I am with Jackie here, in that I have seen your writing grow so beautifully in such a short time. Really impressive poem here. Yes, there is not one who is too far gone for Jesus ... not one, if they want Him, it is their choice.

Love all of your imagery here and that Last Supper video is chilling, especially with the music effects!

Up and more, tweeting, pinning and sharing

Blessings for a lovely Sunday.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for everything Faith. Glad you enjoyed this. God bless you too.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

" So I'll share supper with Jesus, The lord will be my guest". These last words give such a fantastic climax to the fate of Judas that such an end will be all blissful to every eye. John, Great poem ! Voted up.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading Harish, and the vote up, glad you enjoyed the ending too.


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

This is awesome, so funny and creative. I love it. Jamie


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Jamie, I didn't expect it to get a funny vote, but I appreciate it anyway...the awesome and creative are cool.


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Aneegma 2 years ago

If ever there was a trophy for the best poem writer it should be yours! Another masterpiece. Well done.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading and your kind comment Aneegma. They do have hub awards once a year, Most Popular Hubber, Funniest Hubber, Best Poet etc. Not sure when though.


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RachaelOhalloran 2 years ago from United States

This was an awesome poem Jodah. I've been reading over your other hubs and you are a very good poet. You have a good sense of rhyme and meter when you write and for me, that's what I hear in my head and what I look for when I'm reading poetry. I like prose poetry too but I like rhyming poetry the most.

You got it all covered! Yessssssssssssss, you need to write a book and get these out in the world for others to read and enjoy. Sorry to hear about the computer crash. Never trust anything to a save on your computer. Invest in a $10 flash drive (mine is 32GB) and store everything on there (to have 24/7 at home and away) so you don't lose computer access to valuable things like these wonderful poems.

Voted up and shared.


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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

A little dark to my senses, though I suppose we should go there from time to time. I ponder last suppers. Hope I don't know mine is that.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Rachael for reading this as well as my other hubs. I do hope to be able to publish a book one day in the jot too distant future, and yes I need to get a flash drive.

Eric, too dark for you! Oh dear. I like food so much I think I'd like to know when it was to be my last.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

I love the ending to this, Jodah. Your poetry reads so smoothly and always has a moral to the story. Bravo!


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Marie Flint 2 years ago from Jacksonville, FL

Hi Jodah, I decided to read this one because I knew it had to be creative. I thought it would be a twist on THE last supper, but it turned out to be a modern man named Judas. (I was looking for a creative twist.)

Yes, meter and rhyme are consistent--good job with these. Voted interesting.


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States

I enjoy your work my friend. whonu


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Poignant, your last supper. Changing from the bible Judas to a man's last meal before he is put to death. I loved the fact that he was a believer and knew he would see God. Wonderful writing John...


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Shauna, thanks for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed the moral and the ending.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for reading Marie. Haha I usually have a twist in there. Did you notice the play on the main character's name? When the judge sentences him in court he calls his name, Judas Steven Garrett (Judas S Garrett...sounds a lot like Judas Iscariot). Thanks for the interesting vote too.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you whounwho, appreciate your reading and kind comment.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Ruby, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for reading and your kind comment. I had seen a post on Facebook earlier in the day about prisoner's last meals, and just had an idea to base a hub on that.


Michael-Milec 2 years ago

Hi jodah.

Perfectly captured the " last." The betrayal of the Savior or oneself- leads to contemplation of " my last meal." Even slow biting and grinding food can't be easily swallowed at a thought of facing the " last.' Lots of think about , master poet. Congratulation.

Voted up and beautiful.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Michael for that insightful comments your words are so true, and I appreciate your support and vote up.


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Eric Flynn 2 years ago from Providence, Rhode Island

Definitely a fun read, Judas would order a la carte, charge it to Jesus's room and then ask for Jesus to tip the bellhop and then as k for his hand in death. Judas is pretty slick. Enjoyed it a lot Jodah.

EWF


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Good old Judas, Eric...haha. You know him well. I appreciate your fun comment. Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed this.


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AliciaC 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is a very interesting poem, Jodah. I appreciate your imagination! Thanks for the NPR link, too, which I'll investigate. I've heard of the theory that Judas was trying to help Jesus instead of betray him. It's an interesting topic.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading Alicia. Yes, sometimes my imagination takes control...haha. Hope you find that link interesting too.


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A truly amazing write here and you so beautifully let out your great expressions. Voted up, and beautiful.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hello Devika, thanks so much for that generous comment. I am glad you enjoyed reading this poem.


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Dana Tate 2 years ago from LOS ANGELES

Jodah: This story was a very enjoyable read. I really appreciate your work and enjoy reading your hubs...thanks for sharing. I voted up


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A really good poem. Actually that prison menu looks quite good - quite a different 'Last Supper', too.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Dana I really do appreciate you taking the time to read my hubs, and I don't restrict myself to one genre, so I can keep them interesting. It also stops me getting bored with writing, which I would if I had a niche. Thank you for sharing and voting up too.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Blossom, yes it doesn't look bad at all. Apparently Texas has stopped allowing last meal requests because a number of condemned prisoners ordered extravagant last meals and then refused to eat them. One asked for whatever he ordered to be given to some homeless person so they could really appreciate it, but the prison authorities refused. I think that is sad. Glad you enjoyed this.


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

you and Audrey are really tearing up this poetry month and you have yet to disappoint great job Jodah :)


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Frank. I thought this one would appeal to you being kind of up your ally. I have enjoyed the challenge of this being poetry month. Probably will have a burn out, or poetry hiatus soon...hope not. Thanks for supporting my writing.


ocfireflies 2 years ago

Jodah,

Another awesome poem by a really awesome poet. V+ for sure.

Kim


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B. A. Williams 2 years ago from USA

Love the dry humor in it, and of course the choice of his last meal was right over the top. Enjoyed it!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Kim thanks f.or reading and the vote up. From one awesome poet to another.

Hey B.A., thanks for that kind comment. Yes, I had to slip a little humour into a serious situation.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Great and creative take on the last supper. Well done.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you Gypsy, I greatly appreciate you reading my hubs. Thanks too for the vote up. Glad you enjoyed this Last Supper.


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phdast7 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Jodah - Very interesting and creative. You didn't at all go where I was expecting -- the title was just a jumping off place. Clever. There must be something in the air, because not too long ago I did a poem about Lazarus.

Hope you have a wonderful and sun-filled weekend. Theresa


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Theresa, thanks for reading. I think I read your Lazarus poem. Glad you liked this. I saw an article showing last meal requests by prisoners on death row and that gave me this idea. Rained here today, but I think tomorrow is predicted fine and cool.


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tobusiness 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

John, another masterpiece from a talented poet. I now get what you meant about Judas, so glad I didn't inadvertently changed your name. :)

Here's to more great poetry from you.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading this Jo and for your generous comment. You can stop worrying now that you called me 'Judas'...haha. I could understand if you did though, it is similar.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

Very clever John I really enjoyed this one. Wishing you a great weekend.

Eddy.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks for reading this one Eddy, glad you found it an enjoyable read. Take care.


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travmaj 2 years ago from australia

This is so innovative and your concept of the Last Supper really flowed along making an interesting and intriguing read. Enjoyed this poem very much.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you travmaj. so glad you enjoyed this. It's always great to get your insightful and encouraging comments.


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Au fait 2 years ago from North Texas

Interesting play on events. So what happened in the drunken moment that ruined everything?


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Au fait 2 years ago from North Texas

Got distracted and forgot to say that I'm sharing this with my followers as I'm sure they'll find it intriguing. Also voted up, and interesting.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Judas killed his wife, Au fait, hence the death penalty. Thank you so much for reading, sharing and vote up. Much appreciated.


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word55 2 years ago from Chicago

Hey Jodah, that was cool, clever and classy. I have a Lord's Last Supper portrait similar to that one hanging in my pad. I'm glad it happened (the last supper) the way it did. It turned out to be the best for us. Jesus is now, ours. Thank you Au fait for your sharing intuition. You're wonderful!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you for reading word55, and for your kind and true words. Much appreciated.


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joedolphin88 2 years ago from north miami FL

Great poem, strong route to take, religion is always touchy and you've gained a lot of praise for the content. Great read really enjoyed the poem.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Joe. Glad you enjoyed this poem. I enjoyed writing it. It is one of my favourites.


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carrie Lee Night 2 years ago from Northeast United States

Gripping and deserving of a poetry contest :). Emotional; if judges don't approve of this one, they may be too political and may never be satisfied.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thanks Carrie, this was actually one of the next I was considering entering, and you are the second to recommend 'two left feet'.


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vocalcoach 21 months ago from Nashville Tn.

Oh Jodah, your poetry is magnificent. I am very impressed. The ending is perfect and made me tear up. Your connection with Judas Iscariot and Judas Stephen Garrett is brilliant!

I voted up, useful, awesome, beautiful and interesting. I'll be sharing this as well. Thank you John dear.

Audrey


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Jodah 21 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Why thank you dear Audrey for such encouraging words. This poem is one of my personal favourites and I am please you liked it enough to share it as well.


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peachpurple 21 months ago from Home Sweet Home

Awesome poem, judas should read it loud and clear by now


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Jodah 21 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Thank you peachpurple, glad you enjoyed this.


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no body 21 months ago from Rochester, New York

Jesus is quick to forgive a repentant heart but consequences of sin fall hard many times. The man who understood too late to live his life focused on Christ gave his attention and thinking mind to alcohol. So many times this happens and by God's grace we do not hurt anyone. I see this person must have done so and was clearly guilty. Now as the Life ends that he wasted in his physical body all he has is what-ifs for what could have been done with the years left to him. Was the drink worth it? Many of us think so, but I wonder. I truly DO believe in death-bed conversions and condemned man rethinks. But I also believe that they are far and few. Because at that moment on top of the guilt of what he had done to get to this point, he will also have to grasp the weight of his whole sin nature. I am skeptical that this happens often but I think it can and I am very glad your character in the story did end up being with Jesus, repenting and converting. It was a great story, full of thought-provoking lines that made me introspective and mindful of my blessings and to refocus my thoughts for the day on my Savior. I voted up and useful and awesome. God bless, Bob.


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Jodah 21 months ago from Queensland Australia Author

Hi Bob, thank you for your observant and insightful comment. You offer more food for thought but I agree with your observations. Sometimes unfortunately for many people it's not the"Holy Spirit" that they put their faith in but the spirit contained in a bottle. I appreciate your vote up too, and I can now say without a word of a lie.."no body' has read this hub.

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