The Life Force (a poem of an inspiring understanding)

The fine breath we take, our very being, we owe to the creator of all...
The fine breath we take, our very being, we owe to the creator of all...
The life force.. its essence in a bright spirit...
The life force.. its essence in a bright spirit...
from the smallest organisms to the greatest creatures on this earth, the life energy is so given...
from the smallest organisms to the greatest creatures on this earth, the life energy is so given...
Each has its own special purpose and place in this broad universe...
Each has its own special purpose and place in this broad universe...
The life force a bright energy and breath, given by the creator of all...
The life force a bright energy and breath, given by the creator of all...

There is a fine source, of every life, in its course,

Provides the fond breaths, that we to each take,

This life giving force, that we all do so endorse,

Of a brightest energy, a radiance, it does make.


Each one is to live, and every day we may give,

Our happiness, our joys, that each so shares,

To the benefactor, as our great heavenly host,

We mean the most. all to show that he cares.


Each life, as a lightning's strike, and ours to avail,

Endows the great, the meek, as strong or so frail.

Not by some chance, or as a vague circumstance,

Every creature, is of its own kind, and to prevail.


An Atom's core, all to store, so strewn, near and afar,

Galaxies of a universe, dispersed, all, of a special star.

The grand scheme of things, the great scope it brings,

No denial, we insist to all exist, and to justify who we are.





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Every being, every fabric of life, to be all related..
Every being, every fabric of life, to be all related..

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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

Whonu, you are such a purveyor of all that is good. Please keep shining your light on the universe. We need people like you!


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whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States Author

Thanks so much for your kind words my friend. whonu


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aviannovice 23 months ago from Stillwater, OK

A very true piece of work!


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whonunuwho 23 months ago from United States Author

Thank you for your nice comments my friend. whonu

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