The Light With Me

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The Light:

Bright yellow light,

Shining down on me…

Prayer mode,

God please walk with me…


Standing under the beautiful tree…

I look at the world,

That you blessed for me to be…

And I’m grateful to you, for making me; me.


I stand here before you,

With tears in my eyes,

Not because I am sad or mad,

But because the thought of you,

Makes me cry…


I don’t ask myself why…

Because I already know,

That when I leave this planet,

You’re taking me home.



Written by: Jlono © 2011

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ROMANCER OF LIFE 3 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thank you Kim! Many blessings to you as well.


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foemeno 3 years ago from New York

like an ice cube, tasteless without flow


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

A lovely and lyrical piece. The song you selected is perfect as well. V+++

Wishing you a many blessings,

Kim


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thank you Eiddwen... So great to have you visit.

Be blessed!

Romancer


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Great poem.


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thank you Arthur!

For such a beautiful and positive comment. I am delighted that you stopped by to read this poem.

I will continue to walk with him =D

May you have a blessed and beautiful day everyday!

Romancer


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Arthur Gulumian 5 years ago from Pasadena, CA

Very good. It seems like you're well in-tune with God and understand him to some degree.

Most people believe in God out of fear, but you believe in him out of love; that is why you're his daughter.

May you always walk with Him. :]


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thank you :) Cracknutcase!

Walking with God is a beautiful experience. Thank you for reading.

Romancer


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Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

Wow! This is so beautiful and fills my heart with the urge to talk to God too.. Pure devotion is wat this poem reflects...

Thank u for writing this ;)

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