The Love That Sadly Got Away - Sad Poetry

It could have been the love I am waiting for

The unique feel of the fresh warm wind in winter

Or the unusual cold breeze in the summer's day

But indeed it was just a dream

A dream I always held in my heart

Like the teddy I like to hold on to

Your words are music in my silent nights

They are my guiding light when I am sad

I could have died long before

But you gave me smile and hope

Then suddenly you said goodbye

Things will be better for us, you said

Then I wonder how could it be better

When I was sad and crying

Yes, I understand what you said

But at times it is hard to fathom the words

The heart can't understand what the mind wants to do

How could you just gave up a love

And never fight for the love that was

Maybe you're right, it is the best for us

But who knows what could have happened

We all know what true love can bring

Its only the lovers can feel

The pain a failed love can bring

Specially for a true love

The love that sadly got away.

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The Love That Sadly Got Away - Below is a beautiful image of a yellow rose in full bloom, like a love withering away but keep coming back where it belongs

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xixi12 6 years ago from Everywhere but here. In the truest sense, freedom cannot be bestowed; it must be achieved. You can never be truly free till you have the discipline to manage it.

Lovely poem, very heartfelt. Hope you did not lose anyone close to you.


ankigarg87 6 years ago

very lovely poem i enjoyed a lot while reading thanks for the poem


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samsons1 6 years ago from Tennessee

up & beautiful! well written, meaningful may God give you strength...


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RevLady 6 years ago from Lantana, Florida

A lovely poem Maita. It is touching.

Love, peace and joy in Him,

Forever His,


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K9keystrokes 6 years ago from Northern, California

This is wonderful Maita. You always help me remember the important things in this life.

Beautiful and UP.

K9


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breakfastpop 6 years ago

What a beautiful and very sad poem. Tell me it wasn't something you went through. I hope not.


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anglnwu 6 years ago

Lovely poem, infused with poignancy and longing. It's hard to get over lost love, especially one you hold dear. Rated beautiful.


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butterfly Tattoo 6 years ago from Dallas Texas

Nice to see people are still writing good poetry


DoorMattnomore 6 years ago

hey pretty, I like the pic alot, and your description. Lost love, kept secrets, words held close to your heart. You never knwo "what might have been" but you do know how to love. Somebody else will come along, to keep. I hope your well, this is a lovely poem.


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Pamela99 6 years ago from United States

Miata, This is a very beautiful and sad poem. You did a wonderful job in writing with such feelings.


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Mr Nice 6 years ago from North America

kumustaka Maita,

Lovely but sad poem. I like your new avatar.

~Oftentimes we say goodbye to the person we love without wanting to. Though that doesn’t mean that we've stopped loving them or we've stopped to care. Sometimes goodbye is a painful way to say I love you. ~by Kezia

~You taught me how to love; you taught me how to live; you taught me how to laugh; you taught me how to cry, but when you left, you forgot to teach me how to forget you. ~by Hendie

Take care and good night.


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Hello, hello, 6 years ago from London, UK

That was beautiful and I hope it wasn't true for you.


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Dave Mathews 6 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

Ate Maita; Our Lord gives us a love that will never leave us. Grab hold and never let go.

KUYA Dave.


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fred allen 6 years ago from Myrtle Beach SC

What Dave said!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

No Maita! Here I am! Right here Maita! This is a really beautiful poem Maita.


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viryabo 6 years ago

A beautiful poem Pretty, it reminds me of something that happened to me in the past, many 'light years away'.

Reminds me of the song "The love i lost was a sweet love...."

GodBless


Tilecleaninghub 6 years ago

Nice poem Maita.


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Loves To Read 6 years ago

Maita what a beautiful heartfelt poem. It is very wistful and deep and only comes from a heart that has felt that kind of pain. I pray that you are well as i see that you have not made any reply to your comments.

I will keep you in my prayers, beautiful lady.

Love and Hugs


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sofs 6 years ago

Maita, The cry of the heart is poignantly beautiful.

I hope you did not have to go through all that.

My Love to you.


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

Beautiful, Maita!!!


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US Author

Hi Big TC, thanks and you take care!


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KewlWriter 6 years ago from United States

Sounds like its applicable to me and my my ex-almost boyfriend. Really beautiful


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wavegirl22 6 years ago from New York, NY

I love when you write your poems.. write more!!! Your words are beautiful :)


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Nellieanna 6 years ago from TEXAS

Ultimately sweet and poignant, dear lady. I hardly know what to say in response to the feelings expressed, except that expressing them has power to heal, so long as you allow it to begin to relieve the anguish and not let it build up inside. You find your next steps in God's plan for you as you begin to release the lost one. You can heal and go on, deepened by the love and experience. Remember, if it's real it will be there. And unreal is always unfulfilling. No one can cancel the love YOU have felt.

Beautiful poem.


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tom hellert 6 years ago from home

PDH,

MMm Neandethal Tom sayFire good- pretty girl make pretty words MMMM Me like pretty words make Tom feel good MMMm

Me write like this because compared to your pretty words me talk like cave man anyway...

nice Words ,,,Fire Good *hehe* good job PDH

TH


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Me, Steve Walters 6 years ago from The Big

We search for the right words to say...when love changes. But, ultimately it is too hard to explain. Yet, you manage to describe all the feelings and emotions rather well within this great and sad poem. PDH...I hope you are well...and that this is merely a recollection of thoughts...and of nothing that is current! Signed, Your friend, MPM


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Aw, this was sad yet so beautiful too, Maita. Lovely sentiment in here. Ruminating on love lost, or dining on ashes as I sometimes see it. We have been there in one way or another, moi friend. Love can be a menhir splendid thing, and then again, love can be a bitch too! Heh! Cheers!! :)


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tonymac04 6 years ago from South Africa

Le chagrin d'amour! Love lost so sweetly expressed.

Thanks for sharing these heartfelt words.

Love and peace

Tony


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mythbuster 6 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

Beautiful and bittersweet, Maita. Thank you for sharing this.


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

A poem of beauty yet sadness between the lines of tears rolling down your cheeks sweet lady. I hope you have love again and moving forward. Here is a link to another hubber who writes of love, simply beautiful like yours. Enjoy

http://hubpages.com/hub/timeandworldagainstlove


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Rebecca E. 6 years ago from Canada

lovely, very lovely, I am pleased to finally read it, and wish I had read it sooner, you are so talented. This is so heartfelt.


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US Author

Hi! Thanks for all your comment. I appreciate it, Maita


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TINA V 6 years ago

This is a beautiful, but a sad poem. I like what you wrote, "But at times it is hard to fathom the words;

The heart can't understand what the mind wants to do"

You seem to be a strong lady. I hope you have already moved on with your lost love. I guess, it would be lovelier the second or nth time around. Have a great weekend!


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DavePrice 6 years ago from Sugar Grove, Ill

Its hard to find the words the heart wants to say, but you've made beautiful work of it - beautiful.


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Tenerife Islander 6 years ago from Tenerife

Very beautiful and emotional words! Voted up!


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theirishobserver. 6 years ago from Ireland

Nice poetry....wonderful woman.....hublicious hubber....the writing gets better and better.....keep up the good work.......Irish


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Money Glitch 6 years ago from Texas

Hey Maita, I saw your new avatar in the forums and decided to stop by to see what was going on. Woo wee the new avatar is hot and mysterious. Hum mum love will do you that way.:) Rating the poem up! Take care! :)


TattoGuy 6 years ago

Only just found this Poem, you ladies on here have a talent at writing poems, I love this one.


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Madison22 6 years ago from NYC

A beautiful and heartwarming poem. As usual your work is profound. Thank you PDH for sharing this lovely piece:)


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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

Good to see you again, Maita. This is a beautiful hub from you. I love your poem. Touch my heart indeed. Thank you very much. I give my VOTE UP for you. ~prasetio


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2patricias 6 years ago from Sussex by the Sea

Very bitter-sweet poem, and well written.

Sorry to tell you this, but I think the flower in the photo is really a marigold, not a rose. But it is still very pretty.


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US Author

Thanks all for commenting, Hi Patricia, the friend who sent me that one also told me, LOL< I just keep it that way, didn't edit it... Thanks Patricia and everyone, I appreciate your comments..Maita


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

I would never want to "get away".


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US Author

Hmm, you will run away with your bike Mick, then for sure you will come back, Thank you for not 'getting away' so fast, hehe, Maita


the fix 6 years ago

That was beautiful! Keep writing and sharing your poetry!

You are always and in so many ways an inspiration!


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US Author

Thanks the fix, Maita


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

A beautiful heart felt poem, wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing your words.


muvhen 5 years ago

love it, nice poem


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Pearldiver 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

- BUMP!! -

And yes I agree with every other comment. The love that sadly got away... was sadly not meant be, but you know when you know love, some love can only be... when it lives free.

And Maita.. tracking cookies also work well! Take care always.. PD


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prettydarkhorse 4 years ago from US Author

Thanks Rob! Good to see you! I just woke up, will make me track cookies now! I am slowly setting the feelings free! Take care as well! Maita


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brakel2 2 years ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

What a lovely poem Maita. I enjoy love stories, even the ones with sad endings. You have a way with words, and I Love your user name. You compared love to a withering flower which is a great comparison. I will share this hub Maita. Thanks for sharing. Blessings Audrey


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prettydarkhorse 2 years ago from US Author

Thanks, much love, take care always.


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manatita44 23 months ago from london

Ah! quite a touching poem. Much love.


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SweetiePie 22 months ago from Southern California, USA

Your poetry makes me think about love. Sometimes it is unrequited, and that can be quite sad. However, I guess the positive thing to come out of that is if a person does not reciprocate, you cannot invest too much time in that.


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brakel2 18 months ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

Lovely poem . I came back to read it again Maita. It is sad but has great meaning. I can picture the love, and the flower adds a great deal to your concept. Maita is such a pretty name. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Blessings, Audrey


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prettydarkhorse 18 months ago from US Author

Thanks brakel, Take care.

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