The Magic in Aine's Viola.....

Quietly she glides onto the dark stage
lights as dim as is her smile
Dressed in black daring your judgements
of her dark fasioned style

Her forearms as pale and delicate as
the moon in autumns cool
And then the magical wisps of
music from some eternal pool

Watching her passion and how she
spends it by evenings end
Her soul laid out for all to have
I can only pretend

Her beauty strokes through the viola
filaying our hearts into shreads
And leaves at the end of evening
changing hearts and turning heads

Aine.....Aine will you not ever know
the emotion that you cause
To touch us with your magic
defying unwritten laws

The magic in Aine's viola changes
all I've ever known
And bares all of me to the world
my solitudes cover is blown









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VioletSun 5 years ago from Oregon/ Name: Marie

Beautiful and romantic, I felt as if I was listening to a song coming straight from the heart and soul.

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Voted up and beautiful!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Violet sun , thank you my friend , I can always count on you to share these mind trips :-] I will check that out. thank you .


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

The emotions that

that piece of poetry evoked in me

words cannot describe

you are a romantic at heart


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Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

Very lovely!!!


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GusTheRedneck 5 years ago from USA

Hi ahorseback - "Changing hearts and turning heads..." I think that's what you accomplished right here, Good Friend.

Gus :-)))


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , I probably was at one time , but now ? I don't know. Thanks for sharing.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much Paradise,....


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

I think with my dark side of poetry and your majestic brilliant light side of love and beauty we may be able to conquer them both.

I am in awe of your talent to inspire love in your writings, even though I know you have some of the dark side from your past to haunt you from time to time, it seems to evoke beauty from your quill my friend.

This brought a tear to this old Saddle's eye, Bravo I applaud this masterpiece. BTW congratulations as well for being chosen into the TOP 200 in Hubpages, you are very deserving of the VOTE big time.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Saddlerider , you are far too kind ! I have learned well from all the great writers here in hub pages including the great and talented Saddlerider! Thank you kind sir. Be well my friend.


daddysgirl 5 years ago

Beautiful as always dad!! " And then the magical wisps of music from some eternal pool." You certainly have a ways with words young man! Love and hugs


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Daddysgirl, Love you sweety , Isure am glad yu're fine after those tornadoes, oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo Dad

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