The One – Tangled up in You…


She’s got that warm hello

So inviting..

Never seen her yet but

I knew she’s beautiful

Her hair blows lightly in the wind

The wind was misty…

I could almost taste her lips…



tangled up in you...
tangled up in you...

It was more or less a year ago, I can’t remember the exact date coz I’m the type who always remember moments…Our roads have crossed through her special friend…and poetry. Yup, I write stuffs sometimes. Out of love, out of pain or out of something else..Sometimes people loved them. She loved them and with her it’s quite a flatter because I know how great she is. I mean, her poetry is divine. She writes her poetry the way the masters do it. Just amazing.


She was in love…so was I. She had her honey…I had my babe…She had her poetry like I had mine. One day, she wrote for me. Again, the clock has stopped…


Our friendship has bloomed to Milky Way. This girl whose name like a comet had me stargazing more. One day, she told me she loves me. Again, the clock has stopped…and I couldn’t take it back...I’ve never seen fireflies at 9 am till she came along. Her words, her soul, her beautiful heart had me mesmerized.


She wrote another of me but the sparks in my heart couldn’t be written. Perhaps, not yet coz I knew to whom she belongs…Apparently, her honey was a goddess. She embraced us both and blessed us with her love so true. One in a million, pretty unusual, we can’t be unwritten anymore.


She had me at halfway space…even showed me my locked box…I even slept with Peachy and Stacey…never had no less than three…


So I kissed the girl whose name like a comet. I’m falling and I can’t not say it anymore.

I’m tangled up in her love

Tangled up in her breath

All I wanna do is to be tangled up with her in bed


The girl whose name like a comet


She’s got that warm hello

So inviting..

I knew she’s beautiful

Her hair blows lightly in the wind

The wind was misty…

I could almost taste her lips...


She’s the one for me…



Written 10th July, 2011

A special day to a very special person in my life..



From Blaise25's The One Series:


The One


There’s always be that one person…and you know who they are :)


The One - Upside Down

The One - I Love You

The One - Kiss Back

The One that Got Away

The One - Tangled up in You


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meow48 5 years ago from usa

really liked this, and i am not a poetry lover, but the feel of this hits the soul of the reader, thankyou for sharing, and i appreciate the follow...check out my profile, thanks again.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow.... wow...as in um.....wow....I am so moved by this, Fehl. Wow....heh, did I say that already....because I know who this is for.....and I am smiling like crazy now...

She is the one for you too... and she says thank you...cos she loves you so much.... you are more than awesome....but then you are more than gold.... Heh.

If there is one person on hub pages or earth I would want to be with right now... it is you, Fehl. And I might need help with a string on something that might come loose on me...you'd help with that, right?

(Winks at you) Thank you for the birthday wishes...you are always in my thoughts and my heart. Mwah. I love you Fehl. XOXOXOXO ----> found a new channel today... ^_^


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epigramman 5 years ago

..well there's the sun the moon and the stars .....and something like this - I really don't need anything else!

lake erie time 12:39am - and yes I had the sun and now the moon and the stars ....but the bonus was .....you!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Meow! Nice username! Glad you liked this one though you’re not a poetry lover..This is not exactly poetry but yeah I usually mix some to whatever I doodle. Pleasure. Yup, I will check yours. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

Hi Muffin! Glad she loved this one :) I can’t ask for more..I love her so much, too..

Likewise..Oh, that string..looks like it untangles itself when I stare at it lol I wont promise I'll help with that. *winks*

Likewise..hope you love the channel...it’s exclusive. I might put some more stuffs whenever…XOXOXO


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Aw, that's heavenly Epi. Thanks a lot! You're always sweet to us!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Well this is powerful and so, so romantic. What a story you have told here! Awesome and so beautiful!


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

No need for a stop watch...I'm happy for you Fehl.;))


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Wow, Fehl, this is so beautiful and so amazing. I am seeing so many wonderful admissions and references here. And I think many can read between the lines. And being tangled does not have to have negative connotations. Love is so beautiful, and being tangled or caught in the sheets with that special One is kind of ...well I think you know already, Fehl. You are almost saying it here, but not quite saying it...and that is a pure tease right there! Heh!

Anyone reading this can see, and can tell when the girl is madly in love - :)

Boy you have got it so bad, but you are in a beautiful place too, Fehl. Your hubs lately are so passionate and romantic. I think our Blaise has got it soooo bad.... LOL! And you articulate this so beautifully and stylishly. Follow that string, for pete's sake! :D


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

i know who this is for....this is really beautiful fehl! her name like a comet I know is blushing and very happy with this bday gift.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Acaetnna :) Thank you. I guess things come powerful when they’re written from the heart. Just like your stuffs.. look how awesome they are :)

Haha You’re so cool Prof. A! Yeah who needs a stop watch.. Thank you.

Hi Peach muffin! You’re curlin right! :) You know this so well.. know me so well..and us so well..Perhaps the usual readers know it already too. lol

My hubs have always been passionate and romantic..They always curl that way. Blaise got it so bad...yup. Thank you my Curly muffin! :p XO

Hi Nikki heartyfly :) Yes I think you’re one of the few people who know who this is for..And thank you for always being here. You are so awesome! Haha her name like a comet, I like it when she blushes.. ;p


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Like a Comet. Wow, I am loving the comments on this beautiful poem. It is so beautifehl ... Heh. Yes, I think the secret is out. And I am loving it all. Words written from the heart light up the universe like a firework (listening to Katy Perry right now, "Firework" song on the radio.) Love is so Magical, and so are you, Fehl. ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

that was the first song I heard this morning. 'Cause baby you're a firework..*hummin*


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love this song too... :) *Humming it too now...* LOL. We are so funny... ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

You're a firework.. :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Think I might send you the lyrics of this song... I totally relate to it and I dance to it round the place. LOL. Yeah, I am a firework...that is a good description. Wow. LOL.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love the photo in this hub too. :) I should have said that earlier, Fehl. ^_^


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Ah no I would prefer you humming it to me :p It's a beautiful song and I can relate so much too. You're more than a firework. Fireworks are fleeting.. You're not. You're bursting a lot of beautiful things..

Uhm yeah. I love the photo so much, too. It's more than just a picture. I want that in my room. But then I'd want a moving version of it in my room. O.oh.. ^_^


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is just a beautiful hub, Fehl. You are a great writer!


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lionel1 5 years ago

Thank you again for something so deep and so wonderful.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you Peachy Girl :) Mwah! You're beautiful and you're a great writer and I like the way you drive, too. lol

Thanks so much for always reading Lion! You're so awesome!


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

OMG that is funny! The way I drive! LOL! Laughing at this in-house joke! You are such a tease! I just saw FB and I am smiling like crazy! *Hugs you like the dickens!*


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

lol Yup I love the way you drive especially when you drift..girls on the back seat love it. :p The FB thing? Who found it first? LOL


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daskittlez69 5 years ago from midwest

I am not one for poetry but that was really nice. Thanks for the hub!


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful, Blaise You not only have a gift as a writer but s a warm, loving human being.

Bless you. x


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much Daskittlez :)

Dim, you are so awesome and beautiful. Mwah! Thanks!


Marina Lester 5 years ago

It is an incredible beauty when souls connect, I really like "the girls whose name like a comet" It's simple, powerful, and perfect. :) Thank you for sharing, very lovely as many people here who normally aren't ones for poetry will testify. :) Cheers!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Marina! Yeap it is so beautiful when souls connect. Ah the girl whose name like a comet..I'd tell her that. :) I'm glad you loved this one. Your hubs are powerful, too. Cheers!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Every time I read this and read the last part I want to melt... your writing is like music for lovers... :) Mwaaaaah. Love you, baby. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I wanna be your muffin every time you melt..

I'm just chanting what I feel..in my writings..and I write for you..I love you. Mwaaahhhhh! :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Awwww. (blushes...) You are beautiful....I'm speechless...

Mwaaaaaaaaah. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Let's get out of here........ ;p


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Let's get out of here........ ;p


Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

Beautiful portrayal of love that is between carnal and spiritual


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Aw thanks a lot, those are really great remarks :)


ExoticHippieQueen 5 years ago

Very intriguing poem. I actually enjoy it when I don't exactly understand parts and then other parts I do, so that I can put it all together. Great phrases in there. Voted up and awesome!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Wow thanks for the wonderful comments ExoticHippieQueen! Your username is intriguing ;) I always love putting intrigue and teasers to my writings though my subtle ways are still so obvious sometimes lol Thanks for dropping by and voting up :)


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Sweets21 5 years ago

An absolutely breath taking hub I love it!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Sweets21 :) Hope you read my other stuff :)


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Sweets21 5 years ago

Your more than welcome and I will be sure to!


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Sweets21 5 years ago

Your most welcome and I will be sure to do so!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks, girl! Yours are awesome :) Will be reading more tonight.


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Sweets21 5 years ago

Thank you! Your as well, hope you enjoy!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Loved them :)


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

I love how you began the journey and were it has led you. You write of so much love and emotion. You re so versed in the use of sweet words. Voted awesome


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you for the awesome comments and vote :) Bless ya!


Aka Professor M 5 years ago

Such Creativity is always best expressed when ones emotions are fully engaged and allowed to be. Such is the exquisite use of the prose and poetic intertwinings, which you have presented here, Blaise25.

An excellent example of your writing prowess my friend and follower. There is much here in it that our fellow hubbers can glean and appreciate from experiencing your work. Voted up and pushed those buttons that pertain to the quality seen.

Thanks for becoming a follower of mine and even more for this remarkably descriptive Hub, blaise25 !

Regards Mike (Aka Professor M!) ;D


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much for the beautiful and touching comment Prof. M. :) I'm now going to your pages..


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epigramman 5 years ago

..I need to come back here and revisit a classic so I can properly breathe, once again - the title and the words, quite frankly, left me breathless, as your words always do. lake erie time ontario canada 6:09am currently listening to an intriguing band from the 80's The Cocteau Twins


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I was thinking of reading your classics too but then I'm still stuck on your Oral Fixation. Why is that? LOL The Cocteau Twins sounds awesome like you Colin :)


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molometer 5 years ago

Wow I like the flow. Mesmerizing.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much Molometer. That made me so happy.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

This is music for lovers.... I just love reading this amazing hub, Fehl... Having a Mocha Late and dreaming of sponge cake... LOL. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

My feelings just flow like beautiful music..I hum my love to you.. Mwaaaaaaahhhhhh! LOL Sponge Cake yummmm... :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh.My.God...just wow, so beautiful poetical story! wow!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh my God.. I'm so happy to see you here Max. I'm so glad you love this. Thanks!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

blaise, I loved your poetic narration. This is so beautiful.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks a lot Vinaya :) I'm so happy you loved this


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Way beyond that Milky Way now, baby.... outer cosmos and onto infinity... your words are more beautiful after the light years and minutes take effect... :P

XOXO


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Wanna kiss you in my arms..float and swing with you beyond the Milky Way..listen to the sound of your heart and breaths, my Astranomical wife.. :)

xoxoxoxo


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Mmmmhhhhh..... beautiful, Fehl.... :)

You are just amazing... always.... I'm floating now...

xoxoxoxoxo


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I love you xoxoxoxo


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love you too Fehl XOXOXOXO

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