The Only Thing That is Damaged

Harsh wind banging on my window leaving a spill of light breeze creep in between the opening and I shiver
The trees I hear whistling harshly leaving bird hid in their nest
Clouds in high speed spread rapidly hiding the moon
Street fulfill with traffic, train roar the track
Rumbling the ground, vibrating through my wall and ceiling
So lousy as this broken heart sounds

Tears walks my eyes, I thought of our promise
The promise to love each other until the sky falls
And the earth slits open
But then I learned today, promise that we made
Was never true; Oh how my heart quiver, body shaken by unfaithful truth

Although the promise we made is broken
And the sky is still there and the earth is still whole
But the love is gone
And the only thing that is damaged
Is my heart

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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

You write so wonderful....I voted way up..debbie


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That was so beautiful!!!


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qwin 4 years ago from Malaysia

nice write.. !


Crystar 4 years ago

Beautiful. I enjoy reading your work.


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kevins blog52 4 years ago from southern Indiana

Beautiful poem chanroth, I voted up and beautiful.


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hello everyone, thank you so much for reading, voting and commenting. I am a little upset right now because I receive a message saying that this hub of mine has been duplicated on another webpage and I am very upset because this should be the only hub on the web. Very upset. :(


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

don't be upset, your work is original...our experiences are ours alone...

so sad, yet beautifully written...


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi raciniwa, thank you! I just contact the hub team and they had certified it original! I'm happy now! lol, :)


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

i liked this a lot Chanroth


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi PDX, thanks!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

You evoke sad feelings, but your writing is beautiful.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

you're welcome, Chanroth

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