The Pain of Parting

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The Pain of Parting

By Tony DeLorger © 2011


Why is saying goodbye so painful,

so unduly overwhelming,

a heart stilled by parting love,

the yearning begun before gentle hands separate,

even in the knowledge of reunion.

Within the nurturing arms of love souls rejoice,

imbued by the rising sun or an azure sky,

the majesty of life’s rich offerings.

Yet to be without a love near is torturous,

a breath stolen, a blow endured,

a soul dismembered and wanting completeness.

I try to be strong, take responsibility,

but my heart bleeds water,

the essence of my blood lifeless,

without the thick syrup of my joy,

my soul song quieted by the void of your shadow.

Every second away from you is an eternity of pain,

a relentless reminder of what you are to me,

my heart’s longing a single passage,

back turned on a world,

single-minded and drenched in sadness.

How my love broods when you are away,

tortures itself with circular thoughts,

each leading to you,

my loving surrogate soul,

my all.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Glad you enjoy it Storytellersrus. Thanks for dropping by.


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

I love living vicariously through all you romantics! Lovely imagery and evidence of love.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks you all for you kind comments. I'm glad you related.


time2rite 5 years ago

Simply beautiful...I was deeply moved for I have experienced such raw pain. You have captured the seperation of lovers/lost love very eloquently. It most definitely is a pain that feels like the soul is rent and the heart left bleeding.


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L-Crist 5 years ago from Arizona

Beautiful! Such a raw pain...


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Senoritaa 5 years ago

Heart wrenching, a pain felt by all while parting.

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