The Passion of Your Touch - Poem

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Your Touch

 
 
 

I’m starved for your embrace

A tender touch

To steal my breath

And make my heart to race

 

I long for your tenderness

To feel the sweetness of your breath

That raises the hair upon my neck

And makes my lungs gasp – in spasms of delight

 

Only your touch will ignite the flame within me

Please don’t let this fire die

I’m reaching out to you

Won’t you reach out to me too?

 

And, at the very least,

Let our fingers touch.

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Passion Dance

 

Warm eyes, Tender look

Teasing smile, Gentle touch

Skin tingles, Short of breath

Light headed dizziness.

 

Soft lips, Long kiss

Romantic dance, Inviting glance

Exploring hands, beating hearts

Bodies gleaming, beads of sweat

 

Longing, Writhing,

Groping, Sighing

Mind is flying, Paralyzing.

 

Heavy breathing, Chests are heaving

Hearts slowing, Bodies glowing

Soothing touch, Deep sighs

Heavy eyes, Peaceful Sleep

 

 

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Heart Felt Book 5 years ago from New York, NY

this is so amazing!!I love OMG! very sexy and unconditionally living the life of safe happiness.. I am just all over the place.. I remember when I firsts wrote a poem like this I remember the feeling Fabulous!! Thanks for sharing voted across... Bless


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thank you Heart Felt,

It does make one feel good to relive the feelings of these kind of moments with the one we love.


Kelly 5 years ago

OMG! I never new what was lurking beneath the calm, cool, collective woman you are! You rock!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Snicker,

Oh Kelly, I'm full of surprises!!

I can't believe it! I got you to read poetry!!!


Scott B. 5 years ago

Just what are you trying to say kim??


Scott B. 5 years ago

Really good writing...It gives good visions!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Let's just say, I was very inspired when I wrote these.

Nuf said!


Justsilvie 5 years ago

Truly Passionate! Well done!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thank you for stopping by Justsilvie. So happy you enjoyed the hub.


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PaperNotes 5 years ago

This reminds me of the time when my husband and I are still in the boyfriend-girlfriend stage, we both feel the warmth of our love just by merely touching!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Yes PaperNotes,

How wonderful, when those same feelings, last throughout the years of your marriage.

It can and does happen!


Kelly 5 years ago

Keep writing like that, and I'll keep reading! lol.


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Just keep reading Kelly, you may find more surprises about me!


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epigramman 5 years ago

..this is like a poetic dance and it's so seductive in its longing ....... and often (I find) using the most simple lean words is the most effective way of conveying one's message and you have certainly done that here - in flying poetic colors!


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Lovely - full of life. I'm so pleased to read it, Miss_jkim! You write beautifully and feel exquisitely!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

epigramman, you are so right. There is a time to use simplicity. Using the simplest of words, gives the reader's mind the ability to paint its own picture and ignite its own fire. Thank you

Nellieanna, I am pleased to have you read it and am honored that you, oh lady of exquisite words, found it to your liking.


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ek ellis 5 years ago

Keep it coming you're simply awesome


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thanks for the vote of confidence ek ellis, I will try to continue to put my best pen forward.


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epigramman 5 years ago

.I must return to a classic because you said it all in this one - and I love it - and your words too!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Such kind words, Colin. I am truly pleased that it gave you pleasure, to read it.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Very pretty!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thank you Micky, I am honord to have you as a reader.


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Little Kim 5 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

There is nothing like the ache for a touch. Should you or shouldn't you. That sweet release when two people embrace or hold hands so tightly.We all have been there.


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thank you Little Kim,

I am honored to have you as a reader. This has to be one of my favorite pieces.


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Little Kim 5 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

Easy to see why it is.


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Berga 5 years ago from SKIEN

make me thirsty and longing for love.......

wonderful!


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Glad you found it to your liking, Berga.


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BethanyLynn211 5 years ago from Bangor, Pa

Very passionate and nicely written. Voted beautiful. Reminds me of the poem I wrote called Dreams of My Lover


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miss_jkim 5 years ago Author

Thank you for reading and for the vote, BethanyLynn. I will visit your poem as well.


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epigramman 4 years ago

...returning to revisit a classic here because there is a lot of poetic passion in these words so eloquently put and of course it features you ....... the beauty of your heart and mind.

lake erie time 9:54am ontario canada and sending you these warm wishes


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miss_jkim 4 years ago Author

Thanks Colin! Warm thoughts and wishes to you too.

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