The Piano the violin and I

Before you Start:

 Well before you start reading the darn poem of mine, please download this song by : Shiro Sagisu it is called "never meant to be". It is a soundtrack from the anime series bleach. THe soundtrack is very sad . It was the only track i was listening to when i wrote this poem of mine. One thing for sure, it is a great well of inspiration for me. And i hope you download it or listen to it while reading this. It will get the message delivered in a better way. I downloaded it today from: www.beemp3.com. You may also try other tracks for the same artist that were featured in Bleach as well. Regards to All of you and i hope you enjoy this poem and adore the track!

My fingers run down the piano in melancholy playing broken notes of the life I once had

In tears I drown into that secret place of mine bleeding. And now all I do is cry hard

The violin next to me cries in agony its strings down my fragile body and bones,

Through the scars it finds its inspiration. From the true side of life finds my own moans

A river of sadness that makes it speak silently poetry about the tragedy we have become

 It portrays the inexpressible life that turned to blood and gave us more pain instead of Rum

My life has a superb cast but I can't figure out the plot

My body is turning cold. The tears are freezing on the spot

Life leaves us with challenges that force us to kneel

It lures us with love that we believe to be real

Have I fallen for the last time? Can you tell me why my hands only play those broken notes?

Can you tell me why I cast my corpse into the river of love but it always on its own floats?

Can you tell me why my tears have no taste anymore?

Can you tell me why we have no one to pour?

Our love into his soul and fill that black abyss of wretchedness

The piano plays its last not speaking of eternal emptiness

The fingers run down their course of life once again

Broken helpless horrified his love unable to gain

And once again the violin yelps in silence of seclusion and the piano are left in the obscure

Alone on a night of love and hope, left dimly in the shadows to dance with the loneliness for sure

                                URiel (just writing)

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blondepoet 7 years ago from australia

I listened to the song on U tube as I read, that really is a piece of art Uriel it is so sad with the music too :)


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

well, thank you for the nice comment. I happened to download it while searching for Cris some soundtracks or songs from Bleach that are worth listening to. The music is very sad and the part of the story in which the song is played is very sad as well. I hope you liked the music and the poem as well thank you again my friend for bringing light.


ralwus 7 years ago

Today is a special day for me and I didn't want to be sad. :-( Now you have done it and I am crying for you. I don't want to hear the sad music, so not today will I listen. The hour last I have been jovial now I am sad. It's all your fault! Great poem my dear one, too heartbreaking for me today and I should have waited, but I love your writing and couldn't wait. This too shall pass! Hugs, CC :-)) smiling agin!


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

ohhhh ...this is really heart aching..i didn't intend to ruin your happy day my friend :@ :((....i'm sorry next time i swear i am gonna tag it: this is a sad one be careful not to ruin your happy day!! Appologies again....Not only the poem is sad and so is the music...OUCh.......

Just keep on jumping Im not sad and it will help or run all around the room with two different socks of different color (with a funny hat or anything....and make the people around you laugh LOL...I hope you smile again as well


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mayhmong 7 years ago from North Carolina

Oh man, having to listen to this tune and reading your poem brought tears to my eyes! Waaah!

BTW, I love the anime Bleach too. I'm hoping to watch the series again, once they show what's going on back in the spirit world.


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

ohh ...tears again... thanks for the comment...i love bleach too...total addict...currently following every new episode by every release! Amazing....The manga is far to ahead though..still amazing if you care to read them www.onemanga.com...I hope you enjoy! Uriel


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mayhmong 7 years ago from North Carolina

I'll definetely check that out! Thanks! My little sis is going to wish she has this laptop if she ever finds out about that site!?


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

hehhe Mayhmong, my whole two older sisters and young brothers live on one manga LOL (including me :D)...like bleach addicts...lots of other manga and anime as well.....well that is what i do when we have free time other than reading stories ...So what is your favorite anime?


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

absolutely phenomenal! Epic words, flowing beautifully, tortured, sadly. One of the best despaired and painful poems I ever read!

I couldn't listen to the song because youtube isn't working for me for some reason! grrr...but I have watched plenty of bleach, and I can totally put two and two together.

This was GREAT, Uriel.

You should check out my latest hub too, not sure why, but it seems like your style.

Thanks for posting this, up/awesome/beautiful


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Uriel 5 years ago from Lebanon Author

BenWritings : i remember writing that poem after seeing byakuya bleeding on the floor with rukia around him :/ it was one big blow for me and i cried when they played never meant to belong in the background (i've downloaded the song back then and had it on my phone and mp3 :D)

well if utube doesn't work there is always www.online-television.TV or any single site that features the lyrics which allows you to listen to the song as well :D www.playlist.com works as well :) so try the song and tell me what you think about it :D

I did open a new tab to check out your hubs :). As i always say i love how you write :) so i can't wait :D

Thanks for the feedback and hope to talk to you at some point :D

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