The Road To Love

I Am Not Sure Which One Do I Take

My heart is beating so loud feels like it is pounding out of my chest

Not to worry it is just letting me know I am in love again

I feel the chill that not only thrills but excites my mind to know end

My eyes get all glossy and form a cosmic haze that transforms me into a different state

Every book with a love scene comes into play

Like a dog who found his trusty ball he is so happy he wants to stay

Every breath of air is sweet and more refreshing

Only understanding and peace take over

The loss of control is welcome

Because each challange sends out new enthusiasm and strength

Love lies just under the surface waiting to make it's grand appearance

A new vision that is clearer now than everyone before

Sharing a unique gift of pleasure that numbs the tongue

When we speak we just mumble or forgot how to talk




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Dee42 4 years ago from Beautiful Arkansas

I was hopping on my iPhone this morning, it's 4:24am( work as a CNA) and I'm so glad it landed on you. Ha. That was so good, now i need to go back and read more of your hubs. Great writing. Voted up for ya.


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muddlefast 4 years ago from Avatar Planet

This is beautiful.....


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Shamsud 4 years ago from India

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daisyflowrs 4 years ago from Richmond, VA

I like this. Are you speaking of the time you met your wife or did you fall in love with her all over again? The road to love...which one to take? If the road is smooth and has no curves or hills, that is not love. If the road is bumpy, full of pot holes, steep hills, and sharp curves, that's the one to take; that's love.


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leros003 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Very Deep Poem!


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

haha, telling u its in love gaing , nice punch and lined it well in rythem

forget how to talk because of the tounge dnt have the taste of love very good thinking

thank u


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b. Malin 4 years ago

Take the road to Love... to be in Love...So well Said "Dream On"... I Hope it is Good, and Happy, and Lovely. Only the Best to you my Friend, only the Best!


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

So very true!! Isn't love grand...especially in that special beginning when all is right in the world and the sky is more blue and the birds are singing in harmony! Really enjoyed your hub.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Dee42 I first want to say I admire what you do.All hours of the morning helping people.Your Great!Now with that said I am glad I put a smile on your face.Now I have to find a way to keep it there.Muddlefast You have been busy reading my hubs.I appreciate it so much.I just keep on trying to bring out the best in life.Shamshud Nice to see new faces and I hope I keep on making you happy.daisyflowrs I am on the smooth road now.I took the bumpy road in the beginning and I lost a rim on one of those darn pot holes.Now they paved the road but soon I will get to the end of the road and we will have to wait and see.leeros003 I do tend to go deep some people think it is a sink hole.I think it is a sandbox and I just can't wait to go deeper.moneycop Love will do the craziest things to you.We have to laugh at ourselves and then we can laugh at others too when they are just like us.b.Malin I have been blessed.Each day is filled with surprises and little rest.picklesandrufus for me I hit ten amazing wonderful years and they say you get an itch.I want to do it all over again and again and again.I find itches wonderful they bring back all the great memories and they are so much fun when they are scratched.Well I have more comments than lines in my poem.I would love to thank each and everyone for making my day.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

for sure this is the best path...love this Dream on...


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

raciniwa Sometimes I lead.Sometimes I follow.Hey wait up your walking to fast.Love is made to last.

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