The Rose Queen

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The Rose Queen

Sits upon her thrown

She has worked hard

To get here

She sits alone

Until she finds her King

One who is worthy of his thrown

She has escaped the pits of hell

The many arms trying to drag her down

She has slayed the dragons

From far and beyond

The Queen looks in the mirror

At all her strength and beauty

That still remains intact

Not leaving her yet

Penetrating from deep within

She keeps looking deep inside

The mirror

Thinking of all the pain

All the goodness

All the stray thoughts

Left behind

She smiles to herself

At the treasures she has woven

In her life

At one point

She thought she would never survive

Only having her thoughts

To keep her alive

She started filling her head with roses

Filling all the corners of her mind

The roses were her best friends

They gave her the will to

Smile again

To survive

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Comments 21 comments

Ghaelach 3 years ago

Hi caroline.

A nice story and hopefully a happy end for the "Rose Queen"

Hope she managed to get rid of the bogeyman as well.

LOL Ghaelach


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Ghaelach thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)


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eHealer 3 years ago from Las Vegas

Caroline, you just keep getting better! this is wonderful and very well done! I've pinned you to my "best modern poets online" and facebooked this beauty as well!


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline , quit putting so many good poems out together . I have to keep going back to them , reading them over and over. so nice, but you are taking to much of my time with these beauties.

Michael


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is beautiful Caroline..Enjoyed very much..Thank you..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. This was a really lovely poem. Enjoyed. Passing this on.


Valleypoet 3 years ago

Great images...very well put together:-))


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Mmmmm...the Rose Queen - of course! The beauty and the thorns of life and - she came out smelling like a Rose! She deserves a King worthy of her courage and strength and this beautiful poem deserves to be voted up and shared!

Girl - you got style!


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

EHealer thank you. :)

Michael thank you. )

Ruby thank you. :)

Gypsy thank you. :)

Valley thank you. :)

Leslie thank you. :)


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Caroline - You write such beautiful poetry while weaving a wonderful tale. This ode is full of strength and inner power.

Outstanding


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Shining so much for all of your kind words and support. :)


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Lisa Luv 3 years ago from Conneticut, USA

Great writing! I loved it! This flows so nicely. Voting up and sharing. I also hope you don't mind if I share it further to a few of the groups I belong to on FACEBOOK? One of which I run myself in which you are welcome to join if you wish? The following is the address of my group Creative World. I wish you a wonderful day! https://www.facebook.com/groups/537918086258693/

Again I think this is awesome work!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

A great poem and thank you to Lisa for sharing on facebook.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy..


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CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

The roses- despite the thorns remain beautiful and a symbol of great strength and inner power.

This poem is as lovely as you. *smile*


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

I love the poem its pretty much spot on. But what I really want to say is I applaud all those who chose to stand up and move on, because its extremely hard. You only have one heart and when its broken its almost near impossible to fix leaving you with a shell.This is how I interpreted this masterpiece!I voted up


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Lisa thank you so much for sharing and your comment! I would love to join the group. :)

Hi Eiddwen thank you for your comment! :)

Hi Crissp thank you for the compliment and for reading! :)

Hi James you are so right. Thank you for your comment and interpretation. :)


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Simply a great story line in your poem.. vote way way up and sharing

debbie


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Debbie! :)


Candy 21 months ago

You're a real deep thrknei. Thanks for sharing.


Sundance 20 months ago

What a plaurese to meet someone who thinks so clearly


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carolinemd21 20 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Candy :)

Thank you you Sundance. :)

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