The Saints of Hell

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The Saints of Hell

His reign of terror
was now complete
as he approached
the judgement seat...
By the sword
that he held dear,
he fell without
a hint of fear...
for he believed,
without a doubt,
that a martyr was treated
with special clout,
and Heaven was filled
with righteous souls
who, like himself,
died for righteous goals.
But what he found
when he arrived
was a place where hatred
was nurtured and thrived,
and terror barred
the Golden Gate
to the entrance,
contrived with Hate.
The souls that died
by his embittered hand
waved to him
from the Promised Land
as he was led
to the Lake of Fire,
where all terrorists
are led to retire...
the "Saints of Hell"

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jorja kick 5 years ago from southeast georgia

too cool.. i will have to follow..

jorja


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

WOW! WOW! WOW!...it is certainly smoking in here :)

That was great no clue!! Thanks for a great poem.. Up and Awesome!

Sunnie


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

jorja, thank you, kindly! I shall follow you as well! I appreciate your visit and great comment!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Sunnie Day, your comment made my day! I do not pretend to know the heart and mind of God but I do feel strongly that God is the Source of Love, and what conflicts with Love, conflicts with God...terrorism, inspired by hate, cannot possibly be of God, regardless of the commitment behind it. I hesitated to post this but it came to me strongly...I so appreciate your visit and response! Blessings!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Stunningly brilliant, pressing all your tabs here!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

thank you, acaetnna! I appreciate your read and vote!


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tumblintumblweed 5 years ago

Well, as Sunnie says Wow..Wow Wow..is the word,No_Clue.You've Wowed the crowd !!Pushed all the buttons,my friend....Blessings!

TTW


Daydreamer Too 5 years ago

Powerful writing. Scary imagery. The battle between good and evil is never-ending. You've captured it so well here with this piece. I think you are so right that the source of God, is universal love and therefore we are all of the Gods because, for those of us who love, it is within us all.

Great prose.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, weed, as always! Your support is a blessing! Hugs!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Daydreamer Too, I appreciate your visit and awesome comment! Thank you, kindly, come back any time!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

No-Clue you are still the one to follow my friend. Up and awesome. x


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

star, great to see you! Thank you, kindly! I appreciate your visit and great comment! Hope all is well in your world! Lots of Love!


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Magnificent title. Brilliantly woven.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

mckbirdbks, thank you kindly! That is a most wonderful compliment!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

he was led

to the Lake of Fire,

where all terrorists

are led to retire...

osama bin laden?


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Nikkij, that would be for the reader to decide...names were withheld to protect the innocent and guilty alike.


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tillsontitan 5 years ago from New York

Very interesting.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

thank you, again, tillsontital, interesting is good, sometimes....sure beats boring, anyday!


mckbirdbks 5 years ago

I'm back. That title is so good, I'd put the little copyright notice on it. Make Hollywood buy it.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Such a gem, breathtaking and strikes through the heart, powerful and very expressive!


No_Clue 4 years ago

BeyondMax, thanks! Your support and encouragement are just thrilling!

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