The Secret to a Successful Marriage

The secret


The secret to a successful Marriage

Look in the mirror and what do you see;

a flawless partner without challenges and adversity

that could be your life if you want it to be,

The secret lies within the mirror of truth

it defies who you are,

no hidden agenda, no broken promises

definitely no controversies.

Can you take on this partner?

alternatively, would you rather be on your own?

The secret to a a successful marriage is yours and yours alone.

Are you willing to change the man or women in the mirror?

Does freedom come with a price?

are you ready to sacrifice ?

as lies and mistrust accumulates?

successful marriages is not like a recipe book

it never comes with instructions or direction

it is the confection to another person

as you, live together day after day

knowingly,that marriages is different from living together

nevertheless, not necessarilly better

it consist of sharing your mirror

mirror, mirror on the wall

who is the fearest of them all

It replied"it you who have the answer my friend".

The honeymoon is over,

a brand new set of keys is cut,

now, it's time to shared your queen size bed

as you hesitates about going to bed

with your beloved head-wrap

while cuddling up and giving your partner your back

Are you willing to compromise?

and saver all ties to moments you love so much

as you watch the mirror of truth crack

that secret of successful lies within each and every one of us

however, the key word here is trust,

loving and respecting each other

and avoided mistaking your partner

for your mother or father figure.




Comments 14 comments

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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

so very true, a insightful poem that made me think thanks


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Ruby H Rose 5 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

great poem


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

nighthag welcome to my page, and commenting you put a smile upon my face... thank you

one love Darknlovely


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Ruby H Rose thak for commenting ..

one love Dark


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Cogerson 5 years ago from Virginia

Awesome job, great look inside a marriage....very well done...voted up beautiful and useful.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Thank you Cogerson for commenting...and believing in the hub to be useful


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Sa`ge 5 years ago from Barefoot Island

good one :D


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

thank u so much Sa`ge


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DRG Da Real Grinc 5 years ago from All over the USA

Nice, You just inspired me to look into writing poems for Hubs as well. TY for the inspiration and the Hub visit.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Thank u very much for coming to my page and commenting DRG Da Ginc


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

I know this hub is meant as a positive, so I worry about adding a note. Just keep your well-being and happiness in check as you watch the mirror of truth.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Truckstop Sally (:)


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Aris Budianto 5 years ago from Lying along the equator Country

Beautiful and I won't change the person in the mirror.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Aris never change for noone... it doesn't worth it

one love Annie

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