The Sun Shines Within Me

Rainy days

But the sun shines within me

And love is all around me

Feeling wet and free

Life full of comfortability

Away from my over analyzing insecurities

Sanity is a kinder place to play

A quiet place to see

Hearing nothing but the raindrops

And feeling them tickling my amused face

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IntimatEvolution 6 years ago from Columbia, MO USA


Keira  6 years ago

I loved it, Beautiful writing. Great photo. Thanks for the lovely journey. Bless you my dear.:)

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Ann Nonymous 6 years ago from Virginia

Perfect piece for a rainy day and forecast such as it was today! Well done, figment! Inspired!

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lorlie6 6 years ago from Bishop, Ca

Well done, Figment-and what a photo!

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Michael Shane 6 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

Nicely done.....

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Faybe Bay 6 years ago from Florida

This is lovely Figment. Rainy days are my favorite, too.

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Rafini 6 years ago from Somewhere I can't get away from

A nice look at a rainy day.

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sophs 6 years ago

Awwww, i love this it's so pretty, great work Figment :)

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H.C Porter 6 years ago from Lone Star State

Very pretty and nice way of describing rainy days :)


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aefrancisco 6 years ago from somewhere down the road

nice one :) more please ...

thanks in advance :)

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brethodge 6 years ago from USA

Small but amazingly crafted.. nice poem of the eternal sunshine.. :-) i liked it!

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Lita C. Malicdem 6 years ago from Philippines

You have just shown the beauty of living in that short poem! Lovely photo to go with!

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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

There is something about rainy days that can be quite delightful. The feeling of immersion, the constant sense of being "cleansed" of renewal. That re-awakening and re-affirmation. I enjoyed this.

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Coolmon2009 6 years ago from Texas, USA

Beautiful Poem :)

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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Very pretty thoughts! Thank you!

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alexandriaruthk 6 years ago from US

beuatiful life isnt it? very positive poem!

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Eric Prado 6 years ago from Webster, Texas

Very uplifting, great poem! Kudos!

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DREAM ON 6 years ago

Loved the poem and the picture.I love the rain and the sunshine

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Joy56 6 years ago

it sounds like you have paradise within yourself..... nice place to be.

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figment 6 years ago from Texas Author

Thank you for all your comments. I don't know when I wrote this poem, but most of my poems aren't so "happy".

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