The Sweet Flow Of Freedom.

Rhyme : Born Free.

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We are born free

Free to care,free to love

Just like the flight

Of a beautiful dove.

x

To sing to dance

With a happy heart

Our right to own

Right from the start.

x

Blossoms and doves

Eternally calling.

A life of true love

Hearts freely flying.

x

As free as the wind

As each dawn begins.

Your chance to fly

On a dove's sweet wings.





Freeverse: That First Flight.

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A flight enhanced

by

gentle

trepidation;

anxious but happy;

nervous but sure;

each limb

each smile

each wondrous

moment

caressed in

the land of freedom.

That very first flight

oh so slowly flows

commencing in almost robotic notions

but to swell

to grow

to overcome

another obstacle;

another

unwelcome

psychological

visitor

instantly

banished to the dark

forbidding

cellars of yesteryear.




Freeverse : A Cascading Freedom.

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Faltering wings grow into

wondrous

and

heart warming

motions;

limbs relaxed;

that psychological pendulum

fits snugly into the freedom

mode.

The summer sunshine

carries a flight

high up to the heavens

low down to the beautiful vales of life.

Each nook and cranny

so luxuriously cushioned with a moss like

mattress

protecting

and

softly encouraging

the heart to fly higher

to fly further;

the spirit to soar;

each moment

swathed

in sweet abundant love;

a sweet love of cascading

freedom.


Freeverse : Eternally Free.

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Those once upon a time

longings were weighed down by

that dark anchor of fear;

but today

are flown to

a land so full of love;

carried on the wings

of a white dove of time.

A white dove of love

of wisdom

of eternal integrity

of eternal youth like caresses

from

Mother Nature's golden

and

sharing heart.

A sweet symbol

almost swathed

in a virginal blanket

of pure strength

kindness

and

love.

An everlasting bliss

everlasting faith

everlasting freedom.



Freeverse : Sweet Treasures.

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All sweet treasures

are as free as the wind

as warm as sunshine

as pure as snowflakes.

each one treasured

each one so precious.



Rictameter : Flying.

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Flying

Above mountains

Capturing the essence

Embracing the sweet springtime breeze

Absorb that magical inheritance

Each heartache is today set free

A wisdom beyond years

A sign of peace.

Flying.

Acrostic : A White Dove.

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A white dove

x

Wondrously soothing

Halo as pure as driven snow

Inconceivably treasured

Tenderly flowing the flight

Elegance emits a soft sweet touch

x

Darkness welcomed in sweet slumber

Over beautiful landscapes

Varying degrees of enchanting beauty

Everlasting freedom.


Haiku : In Free Flight.

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Wondrous in free flight

Perched on a beacon of love

Enchanted blessings.

Rhyme : On The Wings Of Time.

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Breathtaking moments

Each beauty sublime

Oh how I fly

On the wings of time.

x

Soft fluttered heartbeats

A world free of crime

How each heart sings

On the wings of time.


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cianeko profile image

cianeko 3 years ago

i like your diction! great poem..


Dimitris Man 3 years ago

You make us fly with your words...


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much cianeko for taking the time to read and comment : this is greatly appreciated. I now look forward to reading many more of yours also.

Have a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Oh thank you Dimitris your words mean a great deal and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

I wish you a great weekend.

Eddy.


JThomp42 3 years ago

Wow Eddy. I feel like such a novice when reading your poetry. I may never write one again :) Wishing you the most blessed weekend Eddy!


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Kathryn Stratford 3 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

These are such pretty poems.


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Janine Huldie 3 years ago from New York, New York

Absolutely beautiful Eddy and thank you for the uplifting words this Saturday morning. Hope you are having a wonderful day and have of course voted and shared, too!!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Your praise is so greatly appreciated Jeff ;but I honestly don't think you have any reason to feel a novice at composing poems;you are one very talented writer and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Have a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Kathryn and your comment is so greatly appreciated.

I wish you a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


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Bumpsysmum 3 years ago from Cambridgeshire

The summer sunshine

carries a flight

high up to the heavens

low down to the beautiful vales of life.

Each nook and cranny

so luxuriously cushioned with a moss like

mattress

protecting

and

softly encouraging

the heart to fly higher

to fly further;

the spirit to soar;

This part really grabbed my imagination.

How beautiful Eddy, there seems to be no end to your creativity?

What a great start to my day, thank you. Voted up and everything.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Hi Janine thank you so very much for this wonderful comment. I hope you are well and enjoying the weekend. Eddy..


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Oh Bumpsysmum (I love that name by the way) thank you so much for this great comment ;which I can assure you is so greatly appreciated.

Have a great weekend.

Eddy.


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Charu Bhatnagar 3 years ago from India

Oh my God. You again took me to a different world, where we break free into freedom, and enjoye the little joys of life. thank you so much. :-)


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Eddy, I hope the wings of time carry us to a time of peace and love all over the world. I love your spirit!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

You are so welcome Charu ;thank you so much for stopping by and enjoy your weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Shauna, as always your comment is so appreciated.

Here's wishing you a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Eddy, beautiful words bring to life beautiful mental images.

Thank you for speaking of new found freedoms.

The pictures are a nice touch.

DJ.


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Ericdierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Carrying this with me throughout the day.


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

beautiful Eddi, your creativity is endless. ....have a nice weekend.!

Michael


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LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Wow, Eddy, this is beautiful! Such flow and beauty....... I lost myself in your poems.... :)

Thanks for sharing, my friend!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much DJ your comment is indeed so greatly appreciated. Here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Enjoy your weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Oh thank you Eric ;what a wonderful comment.

I now look foward to reading so many more of yours too.

Have a great weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Michael for your loyal follwoing and kind and caring comments. I wish you a great weekend. Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Your words mean so very much LaThing;thank you so much and here's to wishing you a great weekend.

Eddy.


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Wonderful poetry... extraordinary choice of pictures! I just love it!

Voted up, awsome and beautiful!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Thanks for the great works including birds. You have captured the wonders of beauty and nature with your words. Awesome and up!!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Loved it and the picture is beautiful..Awesome and up up and away..


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Wow, very beautiful Eddy,


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

I just can't say enough how much I love these compositions of yours. They are a real entertainment, an extra bonus!


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Truly inspiring. Thank you for taking us on this magical flight with you.


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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Eddy. Your wonderful ability to transport your reader to another place is truly wonderful.

Voted up and all.

Graham.


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Pamela99 3 years ago from United States

This is another beautiful poem and I loved the pictures. As I read and saw the pictures I just thought what a wonderful world we live in and I am so blessed. This poetry just jumped off the page to sing out a strong message about freedom and beauty. Well down.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very mcuh to

KIDSCRAFTS

DEB

RUBY

UNKNOWN SPY

JACKIE

MARTIN

GRAHAM

PAMELA

for each and every wonderful comment and each one so greatly appreciated.

Here's to so amnyn more hubs for us all to share on here. Have a wondeful weekend.

Lots of love

Eddy.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Eiddwen...Beautiful words on true feelings and meanings of life..and perhaps if we all took heed we could in life suceed..this is what I speak and write of in life as to living outside the box..taking that which we believe in and striving to do our best at whatever we choose, regardless of the risks, as these are life experiences. You did an amazing job with this write and application of the photos...have a wonderful day...


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vocalcoach 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Dear Eddy ~ My heart takes flight and soars to a magical place when I read your poetry. This is an amazing collection with just the right photos to enhance each verse. Voted up and across. Hugs


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Nellieanna 3 years ago from TEXAS

Eddy, it's enchanting how you used various poetic form genres to describe the wonder of being free! I must confess that, as one who seldom sees haiku written true to its form (which IS its essence), that yours is just lovely, satisfies & gives me pleasure. It's my favorite of all of these excellent poems about freedom you've collected for us!

And of course, my personal conviction is that freedom is one's own choice and attitude. No one gives it to one or takes it from one, if it's the real thing. We can have it simply and only by taking hold of it and we can lose it simply and only by letting go of it. I see your conviction of that, too, in your works here, which makes me smile.

Gets my votes - and thanks.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

How beautiful...soaring, freely...the song Wind Beneath My Wings Came to Mind...my daughter sang that at my Momma's memorial service many years ago. A song of joy and peace and freedom to our family, that is.

You amaze me every time I stop here---so many ways to express such passion. Thank you.

Sending you many Angels tonight :) ps


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

We can only hope we learn to live with "unfaltering motions" and we can find the "white dove of love and wisdom". Your wisdom and gentleness permeates each line you write dear friend.

Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting. God bless.


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prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

Good morning, Eddy (Indonesia time). Wow...you have beautiful poem. I love reading it from you. Thanks for always burn your passion in writing. My vote always be with you. Cheers.....

Prasetio


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much to

KJ FORCE

VOCALCHORD

NELLIEANNA

PS

TILLSONTITAN

PRASETIO

for each and every comment.

All of which are so greatly appreciated.

Here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here..

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

And you dear friend - are 'FREE' to gift us with your inspirational words - whenever the urge overcomes!

We, your always-surprised-impressed-and-comforted readers - are grateful when you do!

This was simply lovely, and as always - i love the many creative ways in which you convey your message, Eddy..

voting up and sharing on..


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Wayne Brown 3 years ago from Texas

Your verses remind me how precious mankind's freedom really is and how much we seem to take it for granted...not aware of its high value until it is threatened in some way. We were made to be free...free as the bird in flight from the fears of the earth or the pull of its gravity. UP! ~WB


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Hi Leslie thank you once again for another wonderful comment ;they are all so greatly appreciated and here's to so many more from us both to share on here. I shall be calling over yours shortly !!!

Take care and have a wonderful day .

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Wayne for this great comment it is so greatly appreciated.

You are so right we were indeed made to be free and not to be bound by life's chains.

Mine are certainly banished to days gone by and ever to return !!! Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Eddy, yes; freedom is precious, we all need to spread our wings and soar to the heavens now and again, your beautiful poems allowed us to do just that for a while. You did an excellent job here. Take care and my best as always.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Hi tobu thank you so very much for these kind and caring words ;each comment from you is appreciated and remembered.

Have a great day.

Eddy.


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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Lovely poem Eddy. Freedom and flight; you made them connect so beautifully.

Voted up and beautiful.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much rajan;each word so greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Eddy.


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Rolly A Chabot 3 years ago from Alberta Canada

Hi Eddy... I travelled along of the wings of your poem and drifted to places long forgotten and yet at the same time I was brought safely back to here. What an amazing poem and one written from the heart of someone who knows freedom...

Blessings and Hugs


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Rolly ;your words mean so very much .

Have a great day.

Eddy.

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