The Ultimate loss

i write not because i am insane because my pen is to powerful to resist


There was no electricity , not enough light, it was as hot as an oven in my room , and all I had I my little copy book and a black fountain pen. The poem unfortunately falls under the Main title of my collection :"Sonnets of Darkness". yet, I don't write because I am insane or have issues like most people think, I write because I feel like it because I and my pen are one. Enjoy XD.

The Ultimate Loss:

The flames are rising,

Angels are falling,

Burning stars are fading,

Our cries rise to the skies,

Surrender to the dark in disguise

Tonight angels are surrounded

By raging fires bounded

They have lost their wings to darkness

Once, seeking a battle of greatness.

All are pones in one big game,

Forced like others to live in shame.

Bowing their heads to the master of the night

For losing their ultimate fight

Demons and demi-gods all hail

For darkness has to prevail

The master of the night

Has come to claim his right

The wonderful scent of death

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Comments 4 comments

C. C. Riter 7 years ago

Ahhh yes, alas he does win on that one doesn't he and way too often. Great poem and my sympathy to you if you have recently suffered this loss.

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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

heheh... thanks for the comment...aint that serious about the dark side though LOL...but its quite an old one of hubpages that had some MAJOr trouble due to some difficulties...And don't worry ...good will win at some point even though it looks to be just a dream .. or maybe it wont who knows... I am really enjoying it here on hubpages though gives you quite an insight on life:D thanks again for stopping by

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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

this is dark and gloomy good thing i read you comment above :D nicely done :D

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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

HEHE... hey still waiting for that cheery poem.. i guess you kinda missed it though :( i wrote one tiny cheery happy call it (a trial version) and published it under the title of let it flow :P you might wanna check it out and maybe you'd change that ideo you got of THE DARK SIDE LOL.. Not gloomy i promise and quite different i think... was working on one about a game i play on the ps2, i dont know if you know it but gonna publish it soon on hubpages under the title GOD OF WAR :P

thanks for stopping by and following up the gloomy ones heheh! nice pic btw :D

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