"The Wind Whispered To Me"

The Wind Whispered To me"

One day the wind whispered to me, you can make it if you try.
One day the wind whispered to me, you can make it if you try.

"The Wind Whispered To Me"

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it, if you try

Just keep your head to the sky

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it, if you try

If you stop using lame alibis

One day the wind whispered to me.

You can make it, if you try

With a heart made up, you can't deny

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it, if you try

Don't be slow or don't be shy.

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it , if you try

Just keep climbing and never say good bye.

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it, if you try

To reach my goals that's on high.

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it, if you try

A beautiful song I heard, Oh my.

One day the wind whispered to me

You can make it, if you try

We're not a bird in flight, but we can fly.

One day the wind whispered to me

You're my greatest creation from the sky

You can only make it only if you try.


Benny Faye Douglass (C) Copyright 2011

© 2011 benny Faye Douglass

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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you FCEtier, for your visit and comment, I appreciate you. God bless you. creativeone59


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FCEtier 5 years ago from Cold Mountain

Voted "Up"!

The "wind whispered to me" reminded me of a line from a Jimi Hendrix song, "The wind cried, Mary."


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thanks MD, for your visit and comment, I appreciate you. God bless you. creativeone59


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

I can hear that whisper Faye.


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Ruby, for your visit and comment. I apprecaite you. Godspeed. cretiveone59


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you JD, for your visit and comment and if my poem help you out, I'm really glad. I write to make a difference for anyone. Godspeed. creativeone59


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful your poetry about the Whispering Wind.

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jagandelight 5 years ago

Beautiful poem, it is very encouraging and I needed those words at the moment. The wind is the power of God giving us direction and comfort. God bless you.


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Eiddwen for your visit, comments and continual support. God bless you. creativeone59


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Tamarajo, for your visit and precious comment, you are a sweet heart. God bless you. creativeoene59


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Hello, for your visit, comment and compliment. I apprecaite you. Godsp[eed. creativeone59


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

A beautiful poem. thank you so much for sharing.

Awesome/beautiful/up here.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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Tamarajo 5 years ago from Southern Minnesota

I think of the wind as the Holy Spirit our encourager and supporter who whispers all your poem includes.

Beautifully done.


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Hello, hello, 5 years ago from London, UK

This a wonderful poem, Thought provoking. You are so gifted.


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Wooded,for your visit and compliment, I appreciate you. Godsspeed. creativeone59


Wooded 5 years ago

Beautiful!

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