Winter Blues A Poem


Winter Blues


Is a mood that just gets too you


The days get shorter


The nights get colder


Now you need a shoulder


Lack of energy


Hibernation begins


Now you wish you had more sun again


The winter blues


Is your enemy


Not your friend


So don’t get sucked in again


Get off the couch and just go out


Energy is low


So you don’t want to go


Get up and out my friends


Are the winter blues wins


By Rhonda G. Waits 1/13/12


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

This poem puts me in the mood for a quick shot of liquid B-12...Whata ya say? Let's do shooters to get us through the winter! LOL! Fun poem, Rhonda...rated up! WB


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks WB for your delightful comment. It made my day. I could deffinitely go for some b12. Thats a fact. Thanks for droppig by always.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Beautiful poem, B12 sound like a right thing to take in winter. Voted up and awesome.


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks writer20 for your comment. Yes B12 could be used right now. Hope winter ends soon. Thanks for dropping by and voting my poem up and awesome.


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

The image is perfect, and so are your words! Up and awesome.


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Will for your comment. You are such a nice guy and a great writer. Stop by anytime.

Have a nice day.


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Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

I felt a pinch of the winter's blues today; dark at 4:30; grey skies and without a hint of pretty snow to apologize for the deep chill.

I love nature, but couldn't help but feel what the blue photo and your perfect words conveyed. Time for B12 - yup! :-) Up and awesome.


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Genna East yes winter blues gets to us all. Its time for some B12 , thats a fact. I was feeling the winter blues , when I wrote this poem. Nice to know , I am not alone. Thanks, I am glad you liked my poem. Thanks for voting it up and awesome. I hope winter ends for you soon or atleast leaves you some pretty snow.

Have a great day.


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Hi, what you need is vitamin D! lol! thats the main vitamin of sunlight, and what it does to your body, oh and a lovely warm beach, sun and sea! that will do it for me! lovely photo though, we haven't had snow here this year, just dark and gloom!


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Nell vitamin D sounds great I willl keep that in mind. I get the sun and sea, just not this time of year. Thanks I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Hope your weather gets better!

Thanks for dropping by today.


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CMerritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

Yep! this one is one that I can for sure, IDENTIFY with....I am so ready for spring!!!!

Very good poem, I was able to feel your words.

Chris


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks CMerritt I am glad you enjoyed my poem.I am deffintely ready the Spring time too.

Thanks for dropping by today.


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Enlydia Listener 4 years ago from trailer in the country

I love the photo...it went well with the poem.


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Rhonda Waits 4 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Enlydia for your comment and I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

It is so hard when you are writing to choose the best photo, I am glad you enjoyed the photo as well.

Thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment.


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Jennifer Lynch 3 years ago from Stowmarket, Suffolk.

Vitamin D, started this winter! Great poem.


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Rhonda Waits 3 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Jennifer thanks I am glad that you liked my poem! Vitamin D. is great for the winter.

Have a nice day...

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