The art of breaking

I love how you pick me up, only to knock me further down.

You are always cutting me down a size.

I love how you keep my heart wrapped around your finger.

Its only to break.


Why do you torture me in the sweetest ways?

You make me fall in love and then send me on my way!

I can't take no more of your games.

All you do is break me down.


Remember all of those days?

The ones I spent in your arms.

I wish they would fad away!

I never felt so used.

No one should feel this abuse.

Get away...Get out of my mind!!!


This is the last time I'll ask you.


Why do you torture me in the sweetest ways?

You make me fall in love and then send me on my way!

I can't take no more of your games.

All you do is break me down.


I don't want to break!

Please just go away!

Should not have ever felt this way about you.


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mikielikie 6 years ago from Texas

The weight of your writing is right for the righteous. very fine writing! Hope to read more soon.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

No one wants to be torn apart or eviscerated by someone who is obviously important to us. Being used and abused are two of the worse things that happen happen to us. I really relate to this, as I have had relationships in the past when this happened to me. I hope you have the courage to move on from that, and find a happier flow in your life. Take care, Chrissie. I love your new avatar here too. Change of image is always good. :)


TattoGuy 6 years ago

You know I love and adore you doncha, I love that you now match yer poems with the perfect video, and as Astra said, love the new Avatar, yer fan always x


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couturepopcafe 5 years ago

Everything we live through becomes part of our experience. It's what makes us great writers.

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