The dance of love


The Dance of Love


Pure as a summer’s breeze


the dance of love is done with ease.



Hearts pounding within the chest.


Fast or slow, there’s no time to rest.


You spin and glide across the floor.

Dip once, dip twice, dip three times and you still want more.


Inhale, exhale with the pace of the beat.


You can’t seem to get enough like cats in heat.



Time for the big finish! So you quicken your stride.


Your face tells it all, the pleasures you feel you know you can’t hide.


An explosion you feel as you twirl your last spin.


Dances like this should count as a sin.



Bodies entwined, moving together as one.


A better dance than this? No way, there is none.


You smile your satisfaction as the dance comes to an end.


In your head a round of applause breaks out as your passion is reeled in.



Wrapped in each other’s arms, you are content.


From one to the other your love has been sent.



Because with the dance of love nothing needs to be said.


Down a passion filled path each has been led.



The dance of love no other can beat.


This dance has no wrongs, isn’t that neat?


Pure as a summer’s breeze,


the dance of love is done with ease.


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Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

Sweets21,

BRAVO!!!!!

LOVE IT ~ LOVE IT ~ LOVE IT!!!!

Personal Note: I am still awaiting to be asked to dance this dance...

Excellent Work!

Blessings!

Ciao...Princess Prisca


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you so much Princess!!! I am pleased that you LOVED IT!!!

Personal note:Me too!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

This a wonderful poem loved it. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you Joyce!! As always I am happy you enjoyed my poem!!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Very nicely done, great pictures and nice flow of poetic word play thank you for this dance, fine lady.


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Lizam1 4 years ago from Victoria BC

Lovely - I would like to dance that dance again


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

SO SWEET TOUCHED.........


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you for reading Cleaner, I'm glad you enjoyed!!

Thanks Lizam1, I hope that you get to!!

Thanks so much Moneycop!! I'm happy my poem has touched you!


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annart 4 years ago from SW England

Neat full circle! Voted up & beautiful


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you Annart!!


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b. Malin 4 years ago

Your Beautiful Poem is a Dance in itself...I Loved the Rhythm and the Flow ...I Voted it UP as well as, Beautiful.


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you B. Malin I'm so pleased that you read and liked my poem!!! Thank you for the votes as well!!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

i love the imagery you have captured here vividly...the dance of love...Bravo!!!


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you so much Raciniwa!!! I am so happy you liked it!!


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ubanichijioke 4 years ago from Lagos

Wow! Really fantastic work!! YoÙ writÉ like one withh sO much experience. Ilove this lines 'Inhale, exhale with the pace of

the beat.

You can’t seem to get enough

like cats in heat'

Really fantastic work!!!


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you so much Ubani, glad to know that you think so!!!

P.S. That's my favorite line too!!

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