The Edge of the Blade......

I touch my finger to the edge of the sword
and drag it across the blade
I was remembering a recurring dream
from out of my mind ....so often forbade

A nightmare more than likely at least
thats the case as in the dark
I dreamt of fighting and wars
swords finding their mark

Often ...it's feeling sharp edges as they
penetrate my flesh
The sharp insistent burning pains
a sword presents it's best

And then the taste of blood from someplace
deep ....deep within
The enemy overruns us .........a thousand
blades begin

I saw the steeds coming fast as they
knock me to the ground
Giant hooves pummel me until
there's no one else around

Each time when I'm awakened I remember
of pains that weren't so bad
I guess it's just not the worst
of dreams I've ever had



Do you have recurring dreams , nightmares ? It's so strange when you think of the meaning , either all of it's meaning or none, though who know's.........?






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SilverGenes 5 years ago

Yes, I have had recurring dreams all my life. Yours seem almost as if you 'remember' something from another time (at least that's what the romantic in me thinks).


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi Silvergenes, Nice to see you , yes from another time ! All of them perhaps. Part of me the romantic and another part the contradictory stone age man. Wait till I tell you about my other dreams ! Be well Silvergenes!


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Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

My dreams have changed over the years, strangely enough I could not remember the dreams after my mother died but they were almost if not every night and I knew they were good, I think it was like spending time with her and that stands out strangest of my dreams.


daddysgirl 5 years ago

I know I do..sometimes I think prophetic ones at times. I have dreamed recurrently of tsunamis before the news form India and latest in Japan, meteor strikes and of the eastern skies parting to angels. Sometimes I at least like to think God is sending messages, but I hate the fact of feeling left behind as I do in many dreams. Then I have the recurrent home invasion dreams, where I'm usually shot, axed or stabbed to death. More so when I was young falling dreams or flying dreams. I just hate the ones where I'm running from either a kidnapping maniac, murderer or unseen shadow and I run in slow motion and I wake up with my heart pounding and drenched in sweat...I could go on and on, but I do have to say my favorite one time only dream was of grandma! I always prayed for it and funny thing is I can hardly recall it now. Also, the parting of the skies was absolutely breathtaking I have to say the sounds and sight stunning!! I for the most part always recall dreams but have infrequently been able to control the outcome. i could go on and on....sorry to take up so much room, maybe I am hoping for some dream guru to interpret these dreams and night terrors... love and hugs and by the way......sweet dreams dad!)


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi Jackie Lynnley , Yes , me too! I also have had the feeling of being able to spend time with those now gone , thats really interesting isn't it. Thanks for the reminder Jackie , good to see you.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Daddysgirl , we have alot of the similar dreams , that running one , whew! And occasionally controlling the outcome ....A Control thing??? Who knows huh? Love you too ...oxoxoxoxoxodad.


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Not a pleasant dream, but an effective poem! I know longer have recurring dreams and I suppose I should be grateful cause they're often haunting!


rn0314@nc.rr.com 5 years ago

I don't think it's a control thing I just think that like some moments of genious we all have.. we can sometimes intermingle subconsious mind during sleep or rem with reality of awakeness and realize " oh it's a dream" and change the outcome! Has happened to me a few times but the more I "control" the outcome the closer to awakeness I become. Sometimes it's a good dream and I don't want to wake up! Anyhow....maybe control although it's a good thing when some wierdo is chasing me with an ax and I remember I have a gun and turn to shoot him!) Nuff said... love and hugs with sweet dreams.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Fossillady, Hello , Yes they are haunting , and who knows , no cause no cure? ...I do love a nice dream but we wont get into those ..:-]


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Rn, I do love the "control" of a dream, when it happens ! Leaves me with a good feeling. Self confidence?....who knowsoxoxoxoxoxoxo Dad

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