The friendly trouser Snake

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A Short Poem: The Friendly Trouser Snake


Passion rose she could not ignore

Her hopes ran high at last a score

On it grew out of sight

Gave her an awful fright

She held on tight dared not let go


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

thelyricwriter, many thanks for the visit, and especially for awesome comment. Much appreciated.

Best wishes to you.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Blossom, You're so right, thank you and have a wonderful day.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

What fun! How great it is to have a laugh! Thank you.


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

This was awesome!! Love the pic, perfect fit for your awesome poem!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

girishpuri, I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thank you for the visit and comment.

All my best to you.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

phdast7, I've only recently started fooling around with Limericks, and surprise surprise, I thoroughly enjoy writing them. I don't know that I'd call myself a Limericist, but thanks a million for the lovely comment, very much appreciated.


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Hilarious, you make my day, thanks


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Vinaya, glad you enjoyed it, just a bit of fun really, strictly for laughs.:))


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Gypsy, many thanks for the kind reminder, and for stopping by, glad you enjoyed. Best wishes.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

So funny much enjoyed. Just a kind reminder trouser is misspelled in the title.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Brilliant!!!

Love this Jo - well done!

Have a great weekend, Lesley


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I have never written limerick but I love reading.

I just loved your hilarious work.


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phdast7 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Funny, funny, funny. And just the perfect photograph. I did not know you were a limericist, and a fine one at that. :)


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Sueswan, I hope you're off that floor by now, :)) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by, it's much appreciated. Best wishes.

Jo.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi tobusiness

ROFL. Love your limerick and the picture is perfect.

Voted up across the board

Have a good weekend. :)


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Audrey, so glad you enjoyed it, life can be much to serious, some time a good laugh helps to lighten the spirit.

My best to you.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Kashmir, always happy to send you a smile.

All my best to you.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Michelle, Who said size doesn't matter? :)) Many thanks for stopping by, very much appreciated. My best to you.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Highlarious!!!!


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Thanks for this very funny Limerick and the laugh and smile !

Vote up and more !!!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Yes, not only funny, but painful too, Jo! Poor guy! and a lucky lady, maybe! Thanks for a great laugh this evening!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Nice one, so glad you approved. Much appreciated. My best to you

Jo.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hiya Max, nice to see you, I hope you're all sorted and ready to rock and roll.

Thank you so much for stopping by.

All my best to you

Jo.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

OK - THIS, i needed! THANK you thank you thank you! tweeting, sharing, voting..(still laughing, too)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

LOL Clever! Ha, Jo, that's just amazing! =)


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

So Mhatter, I'm thrilled to know how much your loved it :) don't worry, it's a British thing.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

It says in my profile I hold youth protection certificates: so I can't tell you how funny this is. I can't tell you, you did a good job. I can't even say. keep up the good work. :))...


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Billy, I so love to make you laugh, mission accomplished. Have a wonderful day.

Jo


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Frank, I would, but there's no money it. :)

A girl got to make a living. Thanks for dropping in before you signed off, much appreciated.

My best to you.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

OMG this is funny! I have tears in my eyes....very well done Jo!

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