The Little Boy Who Peed Outside

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Once upon a time there lived a little boy around the age of 5. He was a very playful boy and loved to play outside. He played games like hide n' sneak, cops and robbers, and freeze tag. When he played by himself, he would make mud pies, throw rocks, and run around. He had a big imagination and could do anything like drive huge diesel trucks, ride trains, and fly airplanes. Now this little boy had a very very bad habit. He did not like taking any time away from his play time and would find a place to pee outside. His mom had told him never pee outside because it was dangerous, but he did not listen.

One day the little boy asked his mom if he could play outside, his mom said, “Yes, but remember do not pee outside!” The little boy ran outside and saw it was a sunny day. He decided that he wanted to race cars, so he looked for a box he can fit in. He found a perfect box in his back yard and got in. Soon he was racing in 2nd place and so close to 1st in the biggest race in the world. He was in 1st then 2nd then 1st and 2nd again... Then he stopped. He suddenly needed to go to the restroom, but the little boy didn't want to go all the way inside. So he disobeyed his mom and went to the closest tree and peed. He was a little afraid, for he thought something bad was going to happen but nothing did. The little boy went back to playing and won 1st place. He parked his car and went back inside.

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The next day the little boy asked his mom again if he could play outside, his mom said, “Yes, but remember do not pee outside!” The little boy ran outside and saw it was a sunny day. He decided that he wanted to drive a train in the wild west, so he looked for that same box he had yesterday. He found it were he had left it and then jumped in. Soon he was transporting gold to another small town in the hot plains of the Western United States. Racing down the tracks he saw herds of bison, wild horses, and a lot of little prairie dogs. The little boy was looking around to see if he could find an Native Americans, but then he heard guns shots. He looked back and saw outlaws on horses chasing him. They were after the gold. The outlaws jump on the train and... Then he stopped. The little boy suddenly needed to go to the restroom, but he didn't want to go all the way inside. So he disobeyed his mom and went to the closest tree and peed. He was afraid again, for he thought something bad was going to happen but nothing did. The little boy went back to playing and shot down the outlaws. He took the gold into town and became a hero. He parked his train and went back inside.

On the third day the little boy woke up from his nap, he begged his mom to let him play outside. His mom said, “Yes, but remember do not pee outside!” The little boy ran outside and saw it was a sunny day. He decided that he wanted to fly in an airplane, so he looked for that same box. He went around the backyard and found it and got in. Soon he was soaring in the clouds flying by birds and seeing people the size of ants. Then a bad guy came from behind and started shooting at him. The little boy dodged the bullets and did a big loop to get behind the bad guy. He started shooting his bullets at the bad guy. The little boy shot and shot again... Then he stopped. The little boy suddenly needed to go to the restroom, but he didn't want to go all the way inside. So he disobeyed his mom and went to the closest tree and started to pee. As the boy was peeing, a bird was flying around looking for some food. This bird had not eaten all day and was looking for some worms. The bird saw the little boy standing next to the tree and thought he was holding a worm. The bird swooped down and bit him. Then flew away with what he thought was the worm. The little boy cried and cried, if only he had listened to his mom nothing would have happened.

by: Andrew Valencia

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Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

I was so keen on reaching the climax of the story...had to skip some sentences in between :)written well.


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avalencia_25 5 years ago from California Author

thanks glad to hear you liked it :)

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