The Rain was Reddy Grey

The Rain Was Reddy Grey



The rain was reddy grey

I saw the woman lingering

as though she didn't know the way.

Wipers Sweeping Rain Away


The car was slowly idling

with wipers sweeping rain away,

the windows automatically

opened wide so he could say,

get in my friend talk to me,

it's been a very lonely day.


Lonelier Than He

She lingered morem she couldn't see.

The rain was reddy grey,

he saw her smile as to agree,

she always would obey


The rain Was Reddy Grey

Though he was not to know

she was lonlier than he,

she smiled once more,

the rain was reddy grey.

And Smiled

She climbed into his car

and smiled.

She always would obey..

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K9keystrokes 6 years ago from Northern, California

Sweet poem. I enjoyed it very much.


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jandee 6 years ago from Liverpool.U.K Author

Hello K9keystrokes, many thanks for reading and commenting,jandee


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Captain Jimmy 6 years ago from WV


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jandee 6 years ago from Liverpool.U.K Author

hello captain Jimmy,

thanks and nice to have you read,jandee


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tonymac04 6 years ago from South Africa

Hi Maxine - this is a sweet and rather sad poem, I think. The woman is so lonely and sad, and yet will always obey.

Thanks for the moving read.

Love and peace

Tony


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jandee 6 years ago from Liverpool.U.K Author

Hello Tony,Thanks for that and wonder if there are shades of empathy..........best from m


ralwus 6 years ago

Yes, like Tony said. The poem was/is palpable with sad and reddy grey. Hey, this should be in the poetry category. thanks for looking me up. Charlie, now you'll be sorry. LOL


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jandee 6 years ago from Liverpool.U.K Author

Hello Charlie,Nice surprise to have you read,many thanks,bye for now


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Don't always obey! Thank you Dear jandee!


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jandee 5 years ago from Liverpool.U.K Author

Hello Mickey,

Always obey

No way!!! But can understand someones circumstances

of pure miserable lonliness!!jandee


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MFB III 5 years ago from United States

What a mystery you have penned, the story hangs like a drop of rain suspended upon glass for all to watch it's descent, did she make it home o.k. or was he a psycho who had his way with her..questions abound...and an umbrella is now my thinking cap~~~MFB III


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jandee 5 years ago from Liverpool.U.K Author

Hello and Wow! What an analysis !Must have a shot at next 'happening',

thanks MFB,jandee

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