The ringing phone .....

Did you ever call I wonder
and was I not there
Someone said .......If she's going to
call you ......she would have by now
For ions when the phone
rang ....and I answered
I wondered
I knew
I just knew
It would be you........
But now
Now
When the phone does ring
I don't even think of you............

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teaches12345 4 years ago

This is kind of sad, but the adjusted outlook does mean a postive move forward. It is hard to go through those times when we have to close a relationship. Enjoyed the poem.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Sadness and acceptance here I think.

Great words as always my friend.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up. Sometimes when we don't get those longed for phone calls it is best to put that person out of your minds.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Magnificent..You can only wait so long...Loved it..


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Sigh...such a shame..at least time heals all wounds, ahorse! Lovely - unsurprisingly..


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

I like the layout of your poems.

Thanks for sharing another one.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

It's nice to get to the point, where you are not so dependent on somebody else for your self worth.

I remember it very well. Ann

Insightful


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Teaches , thats what I need an adjustment !....Wheres the doctor?.......:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Eddy my giirl , Yes thats about it acceptance!....Thanks for stopping by , and You have a better day!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose , Yes , only took me twenty or so years !ha !......:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Always Exploring , Fools are born each moment..... to love ! .......and I ....had been reborn a few times !.....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

ImKarn , thank you ,now you stop that ! I am smiling.......:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Lady Elena...Thank you for stopping by ...:-}


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

There is a beauty in hope, isn't it. Keeps us alive and on our toes at all times... Even though time heals, heart never forgets. Such a beautiful poem!


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prairieprincess 4 years ago from Canada

Beautiful! I can relate. When my now husband and I broke up for six months pre-marriage, I always wanted to hear his voice. Then, after I had let go of wanting to hear his voice, he called. I understand that longing, that desperation of wanting to hear that voice. Such a lovely poem!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

on my own interpreation, this is what happens when we moved on of the sadness and wishes from our past...i've been waiting for that last line to happen in my life.

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