The song of your love

The song of your love,

On my death you sang,

Pumped my beats and,

My heart is working again,


The melody of your song,

Hearing in whispers of breeze,

My breathe started dancing,

And denied to seize,

On this blue sky,

Mixing your rhyme,

Cloud waters my emotions,

Extending my time,


The beam of sun,

With glory of your voice,

Enters my dark heart,

Erasing deaths choice

The melody of your love,

In words of your song,

Fertilized my heart garden

To blossom it long,


You and your every effort,

Is to nectar thy life with love,

Bless me Lord my beg,

Nothing to hide or offer in my dove

Comments 17 comments

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome! Such wonderful words.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks rose..


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Beautifully worded. voted up. Hope you write more like this. Delightful


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penofone 4 years ago

Who is the god in this message?

bless you. Anish


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

hi anish nice joke

liked it

u know who he is better than me...who am i to make an explanation to u


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks dim..hopefully i will go on writing..


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penofone 4 years ago

Not really Moneycop, I believe the worst people write the best things in depression, If you are so great why did you write this poem?

JUST KIDDING

j.k.

Anish


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

beautiful..The heart lives..


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

yeah penofone u are right that worst people erite the best thing in depression but, who is worst and who is best who will decide. the thing id how a person is active to contribute to this creation, may it be any form of life.

i am a poet its not only my feeling i take into consideration when i write i take all the people into consideration even on net, and hubpages..

my every effort is to make happy and take out person from tensions towards deep love melody.

the person considered may be u also

kidding

tc


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

ALWAYS EXPLORING

its being great to see u here gracing my poem, welcome and thanks a lot


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem for me to love and enjoy. Voted up and Beautiful, Joyce.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks joyce...you too is a good writer , every time u write to touch the emotions..thanks for being here


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penofone 4 years ago

How have the great ancient sages received your message in Christ?

I am so sure they would be duelly admirable to you.

Sincerely,

Much in debt,

Anish


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ChristyWrites 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

What a beautiful poem!


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks cristy


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mattdigiulio 4 years ago

Beautiful, nuff said. Voting up, will direct friends to this one. Matt


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks matt

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