The sweetest of dreams


The sweetest of dreams


The sweetest of dreams can only start with you.


You. Your body from head to toe.


You. Your eyes, your nose, your cheeks, your lips.


You. Your neck, your chest, your arms, your legs, your feet.


You. Your skin, your voice, your scent, your breath.



Your body, entangled with mine.


Your eyes, filled with desire.


Your nose, flaring from pleasure.


Your cheeks, aflame with heat.


Your lips scorching on mine.


Your neck, bruised from my love bites.


Your chest, smooth as it glides against mine.


Your arms, tightly wrapped around me.


Your legs, bulging as they move between mine.


Your toes, curling as you reach your peek.


Your skin, drenched in sweat as my hands move over it.


Your voice, soft and rough as you whisper honeyed words in my ear.


Your scent, masculine and musky as I breathe it in.


Your breath, hot and jagged as you explode within me.


Oh how sweet my dreams when you are in them!


When I wake I am happy and I smile all that day and when my head hits the pillow that night I wish for the sweetest of dreams, I wish to dream of you.



You. Your body from head to toe.


You. Your eyes, your nose, your cheeks, your lips.


You. Your neck, your chest, your arms, your legs, your feet.


You. Your skin, your voice, your scent, your breath.


Like I said the sweetest of dreams can only start with you but they end with you and me.


Sweet dreams from me to you.


Comments 29 comments

Vinaya Ghimire profile image

Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Your poetry evokes senses, it is very sensual and of course beautiful that leaves lingering taste.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you! Sometimes I don't think that I can get in touch with the sensual side of me on paper glad to know that I do a good job of it!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

felt and voted up...thanks for sharing


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

hmn...titillating...it leaves so much to the imagination...


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thanks for the vote Moneycop!!!

Hope thats a complement and if it is thanks so much Raciniwa!!!


writer20 5 years ago

Beautiful poem.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thanks!


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Wow sweets,

Very sensual,steamy,heart-racing etc and I vote up up and away.

You are indeed very gifted.

I now look forward to reading many more by you.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much Eiddwen!! And for the vote too!!


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satice_j 5 years ago from via the Bronx, NY

Intense, prose I felt, tasted, breathed in with rapture.

Loved it, give us more! And I hope you are pursuing a book of poetry, yours! Again thank you for this most sensual read!


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you soo much and I am thinking about pursuing just that as soon as I have enough poems to fill one!!!


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Sweet dreams full of desires, lust and emotion. Great poem. Awesome. You ve great talent


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you very much Ubani!!!


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sheabutt3r 5 years ago from inside my own mind where nothing is bound or constrained by definitions or societal norms :) try it

Uh oh dreamy and steamy lol love it sis, keep up the great, No AMAZING, work! Love ya :)


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Lol thanks Gussy!!! And I will surly try!!


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lyns 5 years ago from USA

Nice....


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thanks!


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b. Malin 5 years ago

Lovely, Lovely Poem Sweets, written by a Woman in Love...or who is Experiencing Good Love! Thanks so much for Sharing.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Lol...thank you for reading Malin gald you enjoyed it!


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DREAM ON 5 years ago

Who turned up the heat in here.You have a way with words.Great poems.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much Dream On!!!


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CloudExplorer 5 years ago from New York City

I fully comprehend the true essence of this sensual poem, it leaves me with a feeling of warmth and the air of love being a point of release.

Love making definitely leaves you in this sorta mind state of euphoria each time, especially when both people are in it for the sake of Love itself.

Nicely done, I enjoyed the charming imagery as well.

Thanks for sharing.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you for reading I'm truely happy you enjoyed it and thank you so much for your wonderful comment!


DiamondGirl27 5 years ago

Whoa! I wasn't prepared for that (fanning myself). You have a way with words. Great writing!


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Lol thank you very much!


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Hear Me 5 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

Great read!!! The pictures really enhanced the piece and I admit I looked a couple times!!! Very steamy.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Lol thank you!!! Glad to know you enjoyed it!!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Sweets,I am running out of words to express my admiration.

Wow,

You make me feel as I am there

running my fingers through your hair

touching your body

as if it was mine

looking for your gold

it would surely shine

To raise your body up so high

our lovemaking would be floating

through the sky.

You move me!!!

You inspire Me!!!


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you! I'm happy I could inspire you!

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