The River Crossing

The days grew dark and the air grew chill

For she who lived by the mountain rill

She was burnt with age, but with keen gray glance

Stern, unbowed by both time and chance.


In the town below, the old women sighed,

“She will soon come down from the mountainside.

Today, perhaps, or perhaps tomorrow,

She will come and cross, daughter, to your sorrow.

“For you cannot ford that mountain stream

With its waters cold as December’s dream.

Its banks are steep, slick with frozen snow.”

But I told the women, “I will go.


“I will follow her to the riverside

Be it cold as death, or what may betide.”

But they shook their heads: “It’s a foolish vow,

For she will come down, and not long now.


“Will you freeze your heart on that icy day

Just to wave your hand and see her away?

Best to say farewell, though it be with woe.”

But I told the women: “I will go.”


And for six cold nights she came riding down

On a big black horse through the silent town.

At the river’s edge the horse bowed to drink

And six nights turned back from the cold, dark brink.


On the seventh night, I stood cold as stone

On the river bank watching all alone

As the horse stepped into the icy flow

To bear her to where I could not go;

But I alone in the world that night

Saw her gray hair burning angel bright

And her aged face, once pale and drawn

Blossom fresh as the rose of dawn.


She did not look back, and she made no sign

That she saw me there at the cold shoreline,

And I said no word, but watched mute and blank

As she disappeared on the far, dark bank.


And the women said, as I walked through town,

“Ah! There goes one who saw death go down.

See her eyes, with their strange wild gleam!

Yes, she went indeed to that cold dark stream.”



This poem is dedicated to all the children who have nursed a dying parent.

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mollymeadows 2 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you Cris! You're very kind.


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CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

So touching and beautifully told Mary!


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mollymeadows 2 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you, Nell! I appreciate your visit!


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Nell Rose 2 years ago from England

I just came back to read this again, I had forgotten it was you who wrote this awesome poem! voted up and shared!


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you, Jackie! I appreciate your visit, no matter when it happens! :-) Thank you for your kindness!


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

I had a follow on this so I assume I have commented and voted and forgot to post it, so sorry, but better late than never I suppose. Haunting and very good. ^


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you, Meg! And nice to meet you!


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DreamerMeg 3 years ago from Northern Ireland

Lovely poem.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you, Elias! It's nice to meet you and thank you for reading my poem.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you, Elias! It's nice to meet you and thank you for reading my poem.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you Rasma! You're very generous, and I appreciate the read.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thanks for looking in, Eddy. I appreciate your support!


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you Ruby! I hope the memories it evoked were beautiful ones.


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Elias Zanetti 3 years ago from Athens, Greece

Beautiful poem and imagery!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. So touching and heart rending. Loved this. Passing this on.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

A wonderful poem mollymeadows and thanks for sharing.

Eddy.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Blossom, every now and then I do a sad one. Now I'm good for another six months :-) Thank you for your generous words.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

It is imposssible to convey how this touched me. Memories of my mother were vividly remembered. Very beautiful..Loved your poetry. Thank you.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

It's nice to meet you, Ziyena, and thank you for reading!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A lovely story-poem that must already becoming a legend. It is so well written and the tension built up to the sad ending.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

I appreciate your visit, Sunnie! Thanks for the read, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Vincent, thank you for reading -- I'm glad it touched you. Thank you for your support!


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Mhatter, thank you for the read, your kind words, and for being a poet and a supporter of poetry on Hubpages.


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ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

Very beautiful ... UP


Sunnie 3 years ago

Wonderful in every way.


Vincent Moore 3 years ago

I was led here to read this magnificent work from a posting Hyphenbird had left in Facebook, I am very impressed with your artistry, I was taken by the eloquence and style of your scribe. Brilliant work indeed. Thank you for sharing such a beautifully worded poem, I was moved. Tweeted, and shared with friends.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Thank you for this wonderfully painted tale.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you Faith. I'm glad that it touched you, but not that it made you cry :-) Thank you for your support. You must have the gift of encouragement!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

I am in tears dearest Molly. This is brilliant beyond measure. I have no words . . . This is the most brilliant piece of work. I am blown away. You are truly a gifted writer. Yes, many of us have nursed our dying loved ones. I am so glad you are back writing and with such excellence!

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless you. In His Love Always, Faith Reaper


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

High praise, Hyph! Thank you for such encouragement. I dreamed it last night, almost just as I wrote it, and this is the interpretation that I gave my own dream. I'm glad you liked it.


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mollymeadows 3 years ago from The Shire Author

Thank you for reading, Nell. It was based on a dream I had last night. I didn't want to lose it. Thank you for your kind words.


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Hyphenbird 3 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

Oh, this is so lovely. It reads like a classic such as The Highwayman by Noyes. It is truly that good. Just hauntingly beautiful and well structured.


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Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

There is only one word for this, awesome. I read it twice purely because I saw your last line, so went back to get the proper context, and then it really showed me what your poem was about, so beautiful and yet so sad too, wonderful! voted and tweeted, nell

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