The Window

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The Window


Window... Can you see me looking at you? , Through you?


And if you do, do you sometimes cry too....?




Window... Do you understand when I'm looking out


Into the distant land, that my heart beats broken for a special man....?




Window... Do you get lonely, sitting there?


Attached to a house, in which most don't care...?




Do you cry?


Do you feel blue?


Do you think about all the things that you wish you could do?




Window...Do you love me secretly and I don't know...?


Do you cry with me? When I cry, staring out of your window...




Do you wish you could comfort me when I am sad...?


Does my pain make you upset or even mad?




Window... Do you have dreams of being free one day...?


A day where you can just run and play...




Or do you think... big or small? Maybe you think of nothing at all...




Window... I spend a lot of time looking out of you...


Sometimes I wonder if you have thoughts of what I should do.




I know you’re just a window, but I'm told that everything has a soul...


Does that include you...? My Best friend the window...




Written by: Jlono ©2011


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thank you Eparisi679! *Laugh* I'm going to have to say that I thought so to after reading your poem :D You write beautifully... Have a great day!

~ Romancer~


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Eparisi679 5 years ago from Maryland

We have similar writing styles, this is awesome!!


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thank you ahorseback!

I'm very happy that you liked it! Great finish btw! Loved it. Don't worry about not following me, it's hard to keep up with everyone when your busy in your daily activites *smile*

Thank you so much for a wonderful and beautiful comment!

Have a great 4th of July!

Romancer


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ahorseback 5 years ago

Romancer , somehow I've followed you and not kept up , I appologize ! This is nice and I could continue this by writing about being the window itself ....

When you look at me you always

look right through me

I have listened to your cries

and wear the moisture of your tears

And watched while you laughed with others

but always you look at me

Like I wasn't even here

[Awesome by the way]


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thanks lawrencebeach2010!


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lawrencebeach2010 5 years ago from Shreveport, LA

I like this poem its cool.


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Hahaha babsanju, you are truly funny...

Thank you for giving it a funny, awesome, useful, and beautiful thumbs up! *laugh*

I thought this poem was funny, cute, & interesting! *smile* Too bad they don't have check marks for cute & interesting! *wink w/ smile*

Yes, we all have souls... Isn't that a beautiful gift to have? I'm happy to be and have a soul! *smile*

Thank you so very much for visiting my hub! It's always great to hear from ya. Hope you had a wonderful day. Be blessed!

I almost forgot to thank you for the compliment. Thank you!

Romancer~


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babasanju 5 years ago from India

I am not very sure whether I mark this poem as funny, useful, awesome or beautiful, so I mark it all lol..

I dont know about the window but I have a soul and that surely indcludes you, your poetry and the way feel for life..

Thanks for sharing, it does make me go in depth of my heart.

And you look beautiful in this new profile pic!


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Thanks Julianne! I too love this picture. It's very beautiful and a memory that's irreplacable. Thank you for reading. Happy Hubbing to you!

Romancer~


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Hello Jo_Goldsmith,

Thank you very much for the compliment. I'm very pleased that you liked this poem and the picture. Happy Hubbing my fellow hubber! Be blessed and stay wonderful!

Romancer


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juliannekristine 5 years ago from Philippines

the picture looks really relaxing, thumbs up and beautiful. :D


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Jo_Goldsmith11 5 years ago

I love this picture..and I really love dthis poem. Very excellent and moving work..bravo! be blessed

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