The Beauty Who Made Me See Stars (limerick)

It wasn’t cute girl sitting there

That brought on the stars in the air

Or dreams I begat

At what I stared at

It was how wife’s bat parted hair


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

You are the funny one.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Gee, the wife that appears in your limericks is just flat out mean. Maybe it's time to trade in for a softer model!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Ouch ... that would make for one good part there : )


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

You have a profoundly deep understanding of women! LOL

I love it!!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

I'm still laughing..


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Guess from now on, you ought to wear a hard hat,

Which might soften the blow of your wife's handy bat.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Love 'til you part? A great chuckle today!


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AliciaC 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

She sounds like an interesting wife!


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Never make your wife angry.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Anger is a wasted emotion and dangerous


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ouch!

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