The Call (poem)

Hello

Just called you up to check how you’re doin’

Yes it is me

I’m doin’ fine

I miss you too

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Hello

Hello

They’re all doin’ fine

Brenda landed a new job

Jimmy has a girlfriend

Michelle discovered makeup

Me

I’m dealing with it

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Hello

Hello

Hello

Yes I heard

That’s why I’m callin’

How are you holdin’ up

I’m sorry I just found out

I should have called more often

How are the kids takin’ it

I know I know It must be so confusing

But why didn’t you call me when this happened

I know I know

Listen

I’ll catch the next plane there

I should be there by tomorrow

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Hello

Hello

Hello

Hello

Is anyone there

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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

Does anybody truly know what time it is? Is anyone there?


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kidscrafts 2 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Very original! I love it! From what seem a simple action we do every day, you turn this into a poem! Have a nice day!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

This reminds me of a Pink Floyd song - the same one Bill alludes to in his comment.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

Another great poem Martin.

Voted up.

Eddy.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

This is a different theme and it's great! I love the way you wrote it.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Great new, creative poem, Martin.


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

Quite a contrast from your daily work.

Completely believable as a conversation of necessity.

Possibly a lover from the past?

DJ.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Does anyone really listen to anyone anymore???

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