The Cleansing (limerick)

The souls of the brave men would cower

In hopes of some shelter they’d scour

And church bells would ring

Some mercy to bring

Whenever I’d sing in the shower


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

HA, ha, ha ... your limericks kill me!


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Thanks for the morning laugh.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

same here-smiles


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

That is some kind of BAD singing!!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Try closing the windows! :-)


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Fun for the hills! LOL


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

It sounds like your voice

Has power and class.

Bet you could use it

To break any glass!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Sigh...my kids used to run screaming from the room too..

LOL..

adorable, M..


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thelyricwriter 3 years ago from West Virginia

Mhatter, LOL:) Voted up, awesome, and funny. Shared on FB also.

Done committed:)


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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Was that you? Probably had a different effect on different people.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Too funny..Good one!!


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AliciaC 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is so funny, Martin!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Oh, dear. I'm sure it's not that bad!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Another great Limerick Martin.

voted up and shared.

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

The never ending line of shower hopefuls.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

You light up my days with these limericks.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Ha, HA! Sounds more like an exorcism...

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