The Doctor’s Visit (limerick)

With clothes off then ready was she

For doctor to check thoroughly

Her parts he’d explore

To help her health soar

When dentist once more she did see

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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Working on a cavity????? :)

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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

Hahahaha omg I am dying here from laughing! :P

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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I was laughing and a little worried.

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Ghaelach 4 years ago

Morning Martin.

The lady better be careful of the boring machine.

lol, lol, lol, lol.

LOL Ghaelach

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lilyfly 4 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

Very Cute! "Are You Being Served" had a skit just like this! O.K., Love I had wished for you to pour out your sorrow w/ poetry. Limericks, humor, is not gonna do it.

I had seen your sorrowful posts,. and was so worried for you, still am, but, I don't have a lot of free time, but I'm going to try to go thru all your stuff, and see if you were able to get some emotions ojut.

Sending you, much love and gratitude for your comments, and sticking by me,,, love yaz, lily

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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Wow, an interesting Cavity she must have, I'm sure. ;-p Cheeky, Hatter. Cute and sharing.

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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

great laugh - she overcame the fear of the dentist!

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old albion 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Morning Martin. Another morning smile.



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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Who needs laughing gas!!.... I love your naughty side, you're a bad bad man Mhatter.

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

LOL. So funny.

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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Hanky Panky.. at the dentist.. lol.. you are the best

Merry Christmas


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pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

O my....I must admit years and years ago, I had a dentist who I could have gladly thought of in this way....still chuckling :) sending Angels to you :) ps

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Sharp as a tack, Martin. Sharp as a tack!

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Valleypoet 4 years ago

So it will only be her teeth that are coming out of there pure and white LOL :-))

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jaydene 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

Good one , lol

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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Lol..guessin' her 'health' wasn''t the only thing to um..'soar'? lol..

(lol at Valleypoet...)

still smiling, M! Thanks...

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Sunnie Day 4 years ago me!

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UnnamedHarald 4 years ago from Cedar Rapids, Iowa

Wish my visits to the dentist were like that. Voted up, funny.

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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Good one for a Monday morning!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Good one!

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

HA HA HA! Reminds me of the episode of Saturday Night Live when the three doctors kept examining the young man while asking him to cough..then the real doctors walked in!

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