The Door (tanka)

When he closed the door

For the last and final time

He heard them crying

The memories of his past

What would they do without him

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bravewarrior 20 months ago from Central Florida

Bravo, Martin! Great message here.

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The Examiner-1 20 months ago

Interesting Martin. I take it that he locked them inside the room when he closed the door for the last time. His memories I mean. To go seek a new future.

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